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for River Rapids

by jemstone5

person caz
schedule May 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i can't help it, every time I read that last chapter there, (despite the midbattle INTERRUPTION!!!), I get this visual of every male n the room looking at El and growling 'puuuusssyyyyy'...
Bahahaha.,

i need help.
person The_Malestrom
schedule April 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have two words for you KEEP GOING PLEASE!!!! okay three words
person prairiefire
schedule April 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was so worried after chapter thirty when there were no updates for months. This is a truly excellent story. Thank goodness you are back, but how can you leave us hanging like that.
person Lorna
schedule April 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was only kidding!!! Please post more and don't listen to me. Glad you aare here again.
person chancelor22
schedule April 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How could you do that to us...your loyal fans??? I am speechless! I can't wait for the next chapter. I NEED to know what happens. NOW!!!

BTW, I loved it. I simply love the way you write.
person Vixey
schedule April 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story so far, keep up the good work. i am anxious to see what comes next and if she will still accept him
schedule April 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sorry Lorna. :D I'm catching up on all my hand writen notes i took while my computer was in the shop. I decided, for the better i feel, to sell my desk top system and keep my laptop. it goes with me everywhere anyway, and i'm on it more than my desk top. so, i'm updating like mad. :D take care all. hope to have a new chapter up either later today or tomorrow. ENJOY!! :D
person caz
schedule April 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
to use the immortal words of beavis and butthead: He's never gonna score! He's never gonna score!

sorry. heh.

Okay, just shoot Kire'baa and toss his useless corpse into space... or feed him to the fuckin' bugs. What a fuckstick.

Ver'on is in deep shit. Honestly, he should have told her from the beginning... a truth told earlier would hurt less. Now it'll rip her to shreds.

Hopefully things will work out sooner or later, those two seriously need to get laid. I can just see Ver'on's head exploding in his impatience.
person Lorna
schedule April 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
See now *sighs* I got to back and read all the chapters before Jemstone5. You probably have never had anyone write this but don't update let me catch up!!! LOL GLAD YOU ARE HERE.
person chancelor22
schedule April 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Another one returns! I am sooo happy! I love this fic and am glad that I get to see the end of it. I can't wait for more!

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