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for River Rapids

by jemstone5

person scars lady13
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please don't let this be the end of this story i need to know more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person chancelor22
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
All I have to say is...You had better not end it here! This story line is way too damned good to just let it die here. Waiting anxiously... :)
person Prairiefire
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just had this feeling last night that you would update soon. I thought it would have been this morning though. After the day I've had, I'm glad I didn't get this gem until after work. It gave me a nice chance to relax.

Hmmmm, offering ceremony. What could Kal be cooking up now?
person shortest_warrior
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey! When's El going to have her bundles of Human/Yautja cuteness. I just know you've got another brilliant story in mind and I can't wait.
person Lorna
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please post I will be waiting.
person karmaxp
schedule September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
so you are writing the next chapter as I type right? Great chapter I love it
person Symetrical break
schedule September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Feel free to update
person Edison
schedule September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am glad he is dead and will not hurt anyone anymore. Will Chonie forgive Tan for his actions. She seemed to like them at the start. I hope she does. When is El going to have the babies? Great stuff!
person shortest_warrior
schedule September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter Jemstone. Girls saved, hero definintely got his girl. I thought it was wonderful how Ver'On supported Chonie, such a gentleman.

Don't worry about people pestering you about when the babies are going to arrive. I know I did but.. I also know that they have a habit of arriving when they're ready; whether it be late or early from personal experience. But just the same I can't wait to read about them.
schedule September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was GREAT!!! We are so glad that Tan killed that bastard and afterwards Oh Boy!! Keep it up We want to know if El has her babies nad what becomes of Tan and Chonie.

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