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for River Rapids

by jemstone5

person Prairiefire
schedule September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A death entirely too quick for Heeno, but I guess we couldn't risk Tan's honor for the lowly worm.

I wonder if Chonie will be able to forgive Tan. Poor guy can't control himself.

And where are those BABIES!!!! Quit teasing.
person Prairiefire
schedule September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I agree with Heeno's chances of survival. How is he gonna die? You must update soon.
person karmaxp
schedule September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heeno the Human will die at the hands of Tan'ock the Predator I have a feeling. This is GREAT please more!
person Verbatim
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have been reading this for a sometime and I like everything about it. I can not wait for you to update.I will be watching for it.
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad he will be NO MORE !!! Great Chapters!!I had to read from 9-11 :)
person Parts
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heeno is in some serious trouble and I do not like his chances for survival. Please bring on the next chapter
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Grab your knives and pitchforks, and let's get it on.
btw You got off lightly with that Lorna calling Heeno a pred. She sent me an email one time with names in it that were not from my or any story on this board. Just to let you know! Great story!
person caz
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH! don't leave us there! DAMN!
person Millen Stryker
schedule September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is: The hunt is ON!
person shortest_warrior
schedule September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn that Heeno. I hope he dies a painful death. I hope Ver'On will let the girls go with them. Please jemstone.

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