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September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to read more, please hurry!!!!!!
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September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heeno must be crushed under the boot of all that is good. Make him into glue or something. Have someone rip off his mandibles and stab him with them. Kill him
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September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah, Lorna, just a reminder. Heeno is human. he doesn't have mandibles. but that don't meant that Tan'ock wont rip off something else. (evil authur grin) :D
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September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, I just hate him. He can rip off a cheek and pretend it's a mandible. kill. I do not condone violence but in this case make it legal.
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September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Maybe I should stop reading so much, stories are starting to run together. This is a sign when you start confusing Humans and Predators.
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September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hate Heeno Jemstone. Please have Tan'ock kick his ass. Maybe the young bloods might be able to take home some ooman mates as well. Great chapter, need more, Please.
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September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just when I was going to give you a boot in the keyboard.
I must tell you I love waking up to your updates.
Heeno must die. Tan'ock must kill him. Girls must be saved. Nothing must happen to Chonie. Babies must come, NOW!
I must tell you I love waking up to your updates.
Heeno must die. Tan'ock must kill him. Girls must be saved. Nothing must happen to Chonie. Babies must come, NOW!
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September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heeno needs to die... BADLY!! And will his yucky friends. I hope Chonie apologizes to Tan'ock for being a foolish and stubborn woman. All the warning signs were there before her and she was too blind to see them.
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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Can you update please?
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August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story and characters :) please continue!