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August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I'm very impressed with both of your stories.
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August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OK, this is too good. You must update. Soon. You can not leave us hanging for another day.
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August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I also forgot to say I love The Dog. He's awesome. I was wondering what would happen if a Predator crossed paths with a bounty hunter.
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August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So that rat Heeno is finally showing his true colors. Hey Tan'ock, kill him or better yet make him confess before doing that.
This is an awesome story and I hope you bring out the next chapter. I really hope El doesn't run into trouble, especially with that creep Bastian running loose and living.
This is an awesome story and I hope you bring out the next chapter. I really hope El doesn't run into trouble, especially with that creep Bastian running loose and living.
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August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Top chapter. I hope Tan'ock can convince Chonie to go with him because I think deep down she likes him. I hope Heeno gets what's comin' to him. I hope the Young bloods find the bad guys die hideout in time. Need more Please.
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August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hahaha, that was fun, ZAP pop the tires... i wish i could do that from afar when I see wanker drivers or almost get hit by some jerkoff while i'm biking...
Heeno deserves a royal bitchslapping.
Heeno deserves a royal bitchslapping.
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August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWWW I do not think this was too sappy., but maybe I am sappy, I loved it and I want to see thoses babies born so update okay
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August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah. An update!!!!! I figured you had something up (I thought it would have been summer vacation).
This chapter was so "AHHH." M'Pa is just the sweetest thing, and showing off for El. What a male.
I don't know why, but after going to bed at 2 this morning I woke up at 4:30. I couldn't get back to sleep so I got up and came here to check for updates (first thing I do when I get up). I get here and "River Rapids" is updated. What a great thing to wake up to. I just had to sit down to read it.
This chapter was so "AHHH." M'Pa is just the sweetest thing, and showing off for El. What a male.
I don't know why, but after going to bed at 2 this morning I woke up at 4:30. I couldn't get back to sleep so I got up and came here to check for updates (first thing I do when I get up). I get here and "River Rapids" is updated. What a great thing to wake up to. I just had to sit down to read it.
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August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes! You updated. I don't think it was too sappy. Every story needs a little sappy moment. I hope El doesn't run into trouble at the canyon mainly that goon Bastian. Update again soon please. I want to see El, Ver'On and M'Pa holding screaming, squirming bundles of Yautja/human cuteness.
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August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't know how long I can wait for this story to be updated. It is one of the best here. We waited so long for Ver'On and El's ritual, now we must wait and wait for her family reunion and her children's birth. Please update, please? I'll dedicate my next chapter to you.