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please hurry and update, this story is like a drug to me, i check atleast 4 times a day for new chapters. that's how wonderful this story is.

Please update soon Please. I do read it just a little busy to write a review sometimes. I will be waiting for this Lorna

Loved it, especially the little boy's story...so touching. More please.

please keep writing, this story has become a part of my life it's great, and because of you I have tried my hand at writing, thanks so much

Chapter 7? What happened to Chapter 6??

It's chapter 6 but labeled chapter 7. hmmmm. Are you holding out on us? (OK, so I should be the last person asking that question.)

I love what they did to Bastion. Way too funny.

Don't wait so long to update again. This story is too good.

can't wait for the next chapters, you are great.

Another excellent chapter!! I can't wait to see El's reactoin when she sees her "family" again. I'm also looking forward to seeing if Tan'ock will be successful in winning over a human mate. I juat have to say once again that I just love M'Pa!! *Grins* El seems like she's going to 'pop' soon. Keep up the great work, and please update soon!!!

M'Pa is such a sweetie, even if he is clueless sometimes. He doesn't know what to do because it's his first time. Please. Hello, it's El's first time at motherhood too. I hope seeing her family doesn't send her into premature labor. Especially off the ship, away from Sa'ton and Ter'Oth.

And I still say M'Pa and Ver'On need a thumping from at least one "father-in-law." You know, just cuz.

I am so very addicted to this story. I read Book One! It took me two days, with a break, and it is so freaking awesome! I normally read another kind of fanfiction, but I got bored and came over here and read the first one than ran over here to read the second book and this rocks. i am so wrapped in this. I can only hope though, that this second one ends just as good as the first one which rocked.

This is awesome! And I will so be keeping up with this story for sure. Keep up the very awesome work, and I hope you keep this updated as frequently and possible and that your muse keeps working well! This rocks!

~PEACE~