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Well, bringing back El's family might get Ver'On off the hook for bugging out for months. But man, is Tan'oak gonna have his hands full dealing with both granddaughter and grandfather.

hahahaha, and here comes overprotective grandfather, gonna kick Tan's ass. LOL.

please please update soon im so addicted to this story its not funny, thanks by the way for the cliffie - NOT
But its a wicked story!

you don't stop there. that's evil.

Maybe Ver'on didn't take her little admission too well. I mean he was okay with things as long as he had her heart. To know she secretly lusted for another male may have did damage that the fight made worse. She was slapping and hitting them...what?! When I read that I wanted to slap her myself. Remember readers he and M'pa discussed additional mates and his concern if El' could accept him mating other females to expand the clan's bloodline. Maybe that is one reason he won't talk of her cause he may come back with a little harem for his clan males to take as additional mates? I hope to find out. Well sad they are hurting. M'pa should be loved, and by a female whoed want him as her only mate. El' eluded to that in my opinion, but not directly. This story is really growing on me. (I got thrown in the beginning with the image of a sobbing male predator.) More.

You know, that is just like a guy to help create a problem then run away. Shame on Ver'on. As if El doesn't have enough to deal with with him abandoning her when the going gets a little tough. Let's see him carry three kids at once. Not to mention leaving her with all the responsibilities of an elder's mate at the same time. As if she didn't have enough stress.

Thank the gods for M'Pa. At least he is not out getting torn apart again (although I am sure that will happen later). He shouldn't worry, El loves him. I can't see her letting him go, especially with Ver'on being an arse.

My mouse is so stupid I hate it!!! Anyway, I love the title and I am glad you combined the stories into one and started a new chapter in this saga of El. I have more time to read now so I will be reading this!! Isn't that great! Okay stop hiding behind the chair because I like your story and I can FINALLY read it. Keep writing!

mwahahah.
full of babies and pissed off... males beware!

El's gonna do some ass-kicking? :D YAY!

I was wondering when those hormones would kick in. Of course, they may send someone's foot into someone else's butt.

Anxiously waiting the next update.