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for River Rapids

by jemstone5

person michelle
schedule June 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the next chapters, this story just keeps getting beter and better, keep writing you are fantastic!!!!!!!
schedule June 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
TRIPLETS!!!!! Are you serious? I said she deserved a baby, but man, a first-time mom with THREE newborns!, hybrids no less!! I so do(n't) want to see the mood swings that are coming. *impressed whistle*
person Prairiefire
schedule June 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
M'Pa is just a glutton for punishment isn't he. And females just can't stop themselves from fixing up couples can they. Kal is an idiot if he thinks that even on the slight chance that he defeated Ver'On AND M'Pa that El would have anything to do with him. I am sooo happy she is pregnant, she deserves this so much. I shudder to think what will happen once the baby's born if Fer'aza is still hung up on M'Pa. There could be fireworks there. Hopefully the Hur family has found a home. But it seems like there's "one" in every family. Kire'Baa, Fer'aza, always trying to make everyone else as miserable as them.

This is one story that can never end, I won't allow it. It is just too good.
person Shortest_warrior
schedule June 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad El didn't lose the baby and I can't wait until she tells Ver'on and M'pa. Kal needs to be seriously hurt for even thinking about taking El away from Ver'on. He wants to be very careful Ver'on will kick his ass and pity help when M'pa recovers.

Please let El agree to M'pa being her second mate, PLEASE.

person Chancelor22
schedule June 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter. You sure do know how to make someone's heart drop and stop tho! Is M'Pa made of steel or something? He had better be. I will be very put out if he dies! Keep the updates coming!
person shortest_warrior
schedule June 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor El. I hope Kal doesn't decide to stick his bit in to help. It is after all what he wants to do. Please let M'pa survive I'm gathering that is why his heart sank. But it's your story and I'll read it anyway. Please jemstone5 I want more.
person michelle marshall
schedule June 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is one of the best stories i've read in a long time, please keep writing, you are fantastic at it. can't wait for the next chapters.
person Anna
schedule June 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter!! I was worried there for awhile. I really thought that Tan was going to try and persuaded El away from Ver'on. El is really lucky to have Lee'tha there with her. *Laughs* Fer'aza plan back fired on her, which was rather amusing to read! I wouldn't put it past her to try again, but it looks like El has some new friends to watch over her. I think Fer'aza should get over M'Pa and get with J'on. He seems like the perfect mate for her. Although she can't see it. I loved how you incoporated another Yautja having a human mate. I think it eased El's mind a bit. Speaking of that. . . THEIR HAVING A BABY!!!!!! *Jumps around the room* I'm so happy for them! I can't wait to read what happens next. I hope nothing bad happens. Please don't make me beg. I'm sitting on the edge of my seat. Please update soon!!! Also keep up the amazing job that you have been doing!!! *Grins*
person Anna
schedule June 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sorry in my excitement I realized that I can't spell with sh*t. I meant they're having a baby, but i think you get what I was saying. Now that I think about it. . . Fer'aza doesn't deserve J'on. But I leave that in your capable hands. *bows head* I forgot to say that I TOTALLY agree with Lee'tha about "the best of both worlds" comment. Mmmmmmm. Makes me wish I was on that ship with El!! This story kicks ass!! I absolutely love it. Keep it up! * Patiently sits by her computer waiting for the next chapter*
person caz
schedule June 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ahhh the plot thickens....

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