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Oh no!! Why did El have to insist that M'Pa go with Ver'on? Now she's in great danger. I don't like Fer'aza. Someone really needs to put her in her place AGAIN!! I don't want to see El hurt or labeled something she's not, nor do I want to see Ver'on or M'Pa disgraced. And I sure as hell DON'T want to see M'Pa with that THING. I'm still hoping that M'Pa becomes El and Ver'on's second mate!!! Good chapter. I am really looking forward to reading more. I hope Ver'on and M'Pa don't stay away long. Keep it up, and please update soon!!!

Ha Ha! Throw it back in her face! I love to see ppls plans get ruined! That was great. I can't wait for more. This fic is what gets me thru the day!

Suck eggs Fer'aza. She needs her high and mighty Yautja ass taken down a peg or two. And ditto on what Lee'tha said about mating one of mixed blood, I reckon you would get the best of both worlds MMMMM Yummy. I hope he takes some other Yautja female hotty and she sticks to Fer'aza as to what she missed out on.

It's so good to see everyone coming back. And I WANT MORE PLEASE. From everyone not just you. Which reminds me I should pull my finger out too shouldn't I.

love it, can't wait for more.

*sigh*
thank you...

WOW!! That was a wonderful chapter! It was action packed, There was a brief moment when I thought that El was going to be hurt in the process. It's amazing that after all that teasing she finally got what she wanted, and now she's still not completely satisfied. I can't wait to read what will happen next. I think it would be wonderful if M'Pa became their second mate. Though I'm wondering if El really would like that, but she might after the pleasure she received at the gathering. It might be worth her wild! *grins* Hey, if she doesn't want M'Pa she could always send him my way!!! *Big smile and lustfull eyes* I'm sitting on the edge of my seat. Keep up the excellent work and please update soon!!!

Three wonderful chapters! I loved every minute of it. And now, back to the twists and turns. I love the way you write. Are you going to do another fic after this one? I would really love it if you would. Anyway, I'm so glad everything is ok for now, but can't wait for the action to return! More!

WOW!!!!! THAT WAS SO INCREDIBLE! It was so good that it has left me speechless. I kinda feel like Ver'On! After a build up like that, I am thoroughly spent!! Congrats girl. I can't wait to see what happens next.

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahh! QUIT THAT!
Your worse than M'pa! hahahahahaha
update quickly.

WOW!! What a chapter that was. El sure did put that female in her place. *giggles* I'm a bit surprised that she had that much control considering all the teasing being done to her. I thought she was going to rip that female's head off. *more giggles* I'm so happy that finally we have reached the gathering (next chapter she finally gets what she wants. . .right?) I'm GREATLY looking forward to the next chapter!!! Keep up the excellent work, and PLEASE update soon!!