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for Because the Galaxy is Cruel

by DarkTemplar

person PKayla
schedule January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Finally getting around to reading chapter 4 - my apologies for the delay. Your update is powerful beautifully done as usual. Each section is so filled with vivid emotion. Your description of Vader and Ventress was wonderful, so full of passion and lust. Loved their reluctant to use the 'L' word. The picture of Sidious justifying everything in his mind and the display of inner realization of jealousy on his part was a great rounding out of the character, rather than having him emotionless or merely angry. Looking forward to seeing how Obi-Wan adds to the mix.
person Queen Serenity of the Naboo
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad to see this story updated! ^^
Wow, I really don't know how to describe this latest chapter; it was just beautiful. ¢¾
person anakingirl05
schedule October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Way too lazy to sign in....I just needed to say again how much I love your writing. It, for me, is such a joy to read and to beta! It flows so beautifully and stays with me. Your images speak to me. I hope to see more from you soon!! :)
person Queen Serenity of the Naboo
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your way with words is just awesome and I would never have expected the pairing of Vader and Asajj. I've read your other stories and they're fabulous as well. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next.