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for Leviathen's Bloodline

by Cinnamontea

person MemoriamX
schedule June 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Updated! Yay!

I'm not sure that's what Tori's daughter ment when she said, "Take care of her," but it works!
Chanard's kinda psyco, eh? Once again I love your little things at the beginings of the chapters, but what's wrong with hugging Chatterer? He needs to feel apreceated! (spelling? oy.) now Butterballs a slightly different matter...
person Darkaus
schedule June 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I do love the coments you put at the top of your stories :) but i find my muse dosn't apreceate (Spelling?) it if i talk to him.
Topec looks away, enjoying his own atmosphere way too much.

anywho! i like! keep it comming! (...hehehehe) and thanks by the way! i always worry about my sex scenes, (Who dosn't?) and its good to know i'm doing okay!

update!
person memoriamx
schedule June 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
(Why did I jsut say "Mancream?")
...hehehehehe! ah, the joys of sex vocabulary! where did most of the terms we use come from?
that one made me laugh, I had to picture a handcream, for men, you know.
...well yes, I do have a strange sence of humor, thank you for wondering!
Interesting, and yes, I do imagine dominance is important, but you know that.
person memoriamx
schedule June 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
interesting take on things! update when you can?