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Excelent story 10\10 liked the yavin battle.ps update!

Ok, I love that someone took both of these universes and slammed them together with great results. However, as with everything, the Devil is in the details.

Clan and Inner Shere WarShips and JumpShips jump to system zenith points and let the drop ships burn insystem and land. Only on VERY rare ocasions do WarShips or unarmed JumpShips move insystem.

The Kerensky bloodname belongs to Clan Wolf.

Why would the Khan himself leave his clan for an indeterminable period of time in a JumpShip instead of one of the mothballed BattleShips?

Other than those, I have no complaints about this story. Excellent imagery and well thought out.

Dude this story kicks ass

Very cool. I've been waiting for your next installment in this series for quite some time. I hope you'll continue the great work. I'm in agreement with the above, though, regarding gundam. You have something awesome going here, better to make small adjustments rather than creating an exponential story shift that's far from either of the universes.

hey man, good story, really good, but don't go adding Gundam, keep to the 'mech and star wars stuff, that has already been established in the story. also gundam is a little too unbelievable and going a little too far out of the realm of physically possible
keep up the good story

Amazing i'm speechless...just one question when's the next chapter coming i'm really looking forward to seeing the CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT in the next chapter so please update as soon as you can.

More writing please!

great story! do another chapter lol

This seems like a very well written story and i have only read the first chapter but i find a few innacuracies. For one the TIE fighter is only 1/4 the side and over twice as fast as an aerospace fighter from mechwarrior. the aerospace fighter has more weapons and armor and the TIE has such thin armor that just one shot would take it. There would be no jockying for position in that firht it would be more like gun ships vs fighters, the fighters flitting about and the gunships blasting away. that fight would come down to numberswhoever could place more firepower in the field would win. as for the capital ships, while the star destroyers would take damadge from gauss rifles, the dropships would never get more than one volley off. either they would be blown out of the sky, due to a lack of sheilds, or they would be rendered immobile from ion cannons. as to the ion cannons not working on the dropships, ion cannons short out electrical systems of which there are a lot of on a dropship. the gauss rifles are shot using electro-magnetic coils to speed up a nickel-iron ferrus slug up to supersonic speeds. without the electrical systems they would never shoot. missles use electrical systems to ignite their fuel and to guide them selves and the PPC also needs electricity to shoot. i am a large fan of both Mechwarrior and Star Wars and i have read almost all of the books and seen the movies, and played all the games (exept for the star wars games they get things wrong too often.) so forgive me if i seen condescending i just know altogether too much about this stuff.

man that was freakishly nice
write more.
u play mech assult or mech warriors?