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Hi, I wanted to write and tell you how much I love this story. I cannot wait to read more!

yaaay....you finally updated this story...i loves it alots lol, please update again???

Okay, *deep breath* this was the pairing I've been waiting for. Actually I was thinking about doing an Achilles and Hector pairing myself. . . but you did it so much better then I ever could. Troy is like my absolute favorite movie. I was delighted by your use of lines from the movie. The interaction between Hector and Achilles was hot!!!! The battle scenes were so vivid I can see it. Of course every time I thought of Achilles it was Brad Pitt and every time I thought of Hector I pictured Eric Bana!!! Please do write more of this. I intend to read every one of your stories. You really are a GREAT writer!!!

GOD! I'm just in love with your writing style! You describe everything in extremely yummy detail and I'm loving every second of it. And why can't Hector and Achilles get along? Those crazy, sexy boys need to figure out that they are in love with eachother and just get over it. Lovin' the petty little fights though. Gives them an extra little charm.

Oh and thanks for the shout out :D. And don't worry about the wait. Even though us reader's want the updates asap, we sometimes forget that writers have lives outside of this story. And as a fellow writer I can completely understand how outside things can effect the process of writing. So, do the best you can to update, but if you can't don't worry about it :)

Thanks for an awesome update!

I love this story!

Sorry I haven't reviewed sooner problems with my account. I simply love this story. Thanks for the nod at the beginning of the new chapter. Please keep this story going for your fans. I know that RL gets in the way sometimes, but don't let it get you down you've got talent!

I just found this story and I love it! I don't normally read many WIPs, but yours captivated me from the first chapter. Not to mention I really loved the idea of those two together. The way the sexual tension developed, lets say, couldn't be better. I was really drawn into this story and hooked by the second chapter. Very good job. The first story I read of this Genre and it will perhaps be my favorate.

-Tier

Insanely sexy. Insanely addictive. I had forgotten all about this fic until I got your email. Thanks so much for the heads up :P.

I don't know why you weren't pleased with how this came out, but, as a fellow writer I totally understand how that goes. It was extremely hot and deliciously detailed. I loved every line of this update and i hope you're in it for the long haul, because this definitely has a lot of potential. Stick with it and if you can help it, don't stop writing, because when you take a break, that couple week break is gonna turn into a couple month break and we don't want that to happen of course lol. Great job.

This story is totally HOT!!! lol. I have never thought about them as a couple. HMMMMM...yes. two great warriors having the hots for eachother. I totally love it. I hope you update this story soon. I just have to know what happens next.

That sucks! You can't end the story here. I waited so long for an update. Good chapter. Thought maybe you had decided not to continue this story.