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for Human Hunter 2

by ZenRose

person Prairiefire
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MUST------READ------MORE!!!!!

NEED-----READ------MORE!!!!!

NOW---------PLEASE!!!!!!
person Lovydovy
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Remember that Leena hasn't been given a reason to be jealous yet. Kulvir's mate has been trying to get Shlok to give her some for years, and in my opinion is jealous of Kayla. Kayla doesn't know about his threat to take Kulvir's mate. Gagan and Kayla never got along the way she and Shlok does. Screw Leena, I vote Shlok and Kayla.
person Shyann
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm having withdrawls agian. I need more ASAP..................
person Mal'fan
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, so maybe Kayla and gagan now? If Sh'lok is left out then maybe he should have told kayla how he felt about leena. And I kinda feel bad for leena, after 20 something years as a eta and being raped in the process could change her enough to actually be good and shes getting a tough break for it by dealing with a jealous ooman! but maybe she wll get shlok to herself? Oh I just love this story
person Artwzrd7
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Too many yummy testosterone driven males to choose from. Mahavin can play the game the best, but I'm swinging back to Shlok and Kayla after reading the last couple of chapters repeatedly until I understood better.Please let them make it through this trial in their relationship. They are made for each other! Hopefully Leena won't wig out if she ever finds herself feeling like Kayla does now after she has grown to care for Shlok as well. What if she lost it and Kayla became pregnant again will her jealousy rear it's ugly head? I wonder what she tells the other yautja females? Maybe she has changed for the better. Yeah I'm hating on her cause it is not natural for a creature to share their mate! How will the Jafren affect all of this? I can't wait to find out.
person Artwzrd7
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I ranted on my boy Shlok but I still adore him. I just feel bad for them. How can he sleep inside Leena day and night and not expect to hurt Kayla? How come we never really read dialogue between the happy couple Leena/shlok? Is Shlok doing Leena like Juhi does Nakam...nah. He got it bad for Leena? Will Kayla really care now that Gagan is back? I hope Kulvir sets Shlok straight before it is too late for he and Kayla. If he prefers Leena than he should let Kayla go. I can't stand my girl in pain. Please let someone get through to him. I like nalam, and maybe see a Gagan, Nalam, and Kayla sandwich threesome? I mean they are technically all mated to each other. Oh that would piss Shlok off. Great stuff you torturer.
person Prairiefire
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gods I hope Kayla doesn't do something stupid just as Sh'lok is getting his act together. If she can't control herself around Ga'gan/Ju'hi then she either needs to stay away from him, or take someone with her to keep her grounded. I like Sh'lok even if he is a butthead sometimes. Him and Kayla belong together.
person Artwzrd7
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Shlok always struck me as sharper than this. Once he chided her for talking like a yautja when he said he loved her, now he is chiding her for being what she is. Gagan is not the better choice in my opinion. I'm still for Kulvir or Mahavin. Your breaking my heart here...ouch. I loved him too...dang. I wanna string him up for being so dumb and clueless! All I ask is that Shlok is made to regret his choice cause Leena can't go from baby killer to angel, c'mon! Has she really changed? Well, I hope he figures it out after he has lost Kay'la.
person karmaxp
schedule September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just know Sh'lok is JUST LOVING this. (she says with sarcasm) Ahhhhh good times good times ahead. Great chapter!
person Cara
schedule September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I honestly don't know what to say...I think I hate you. =p
I was hoping Sh'lok would come around and you'd get rid of Lee'na but now with Ga'gan back....it's interesting but it's almost too much. I can only take so much drama :(
I really do believe Sh'lok and Kayla are perfect for each other...damn I'm so hooked on this story. >>

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