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September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story SOOOOO MUCH!!! And i love how Kayla finally whipped Shravan's butt! Wouldn't it be funny if he went to Earth on his hunt and found a human female there that he wanted?!!!
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September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad Kayla kicked that little shit heads arse.
Stop fighting the feeling. I want to feel you come. Such a sexy line. I love it. Need more please.
Stop fighting the feeling. I want to feel you come. Such a sexy line. I love it. Need more please.
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September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh Sh'lok! Wow that was good. Kayla know she couldn't fight that feeling!
Now maybe Shra'van will start to have some respect for his mom and Sh'lok better watch out, Ba'naj got his eyes set on her!
Now maybe Shra'van will start to have some respect for his mom and Sh'lok better watch out, Ba'naj got his eyes set on her!
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September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank You for posting..Can't wait for more
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September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you updated. I loved it when Kayla kicked Shra'van's ass. Little brat needed it. I'm disappointed about Sh'lok though. He got some without working out the problems. Totally unfair. Please update again!!
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September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great lines from the most memorable scenes: "Surly my mother did not drop us," & “You want to meet me in the sparring hall as well?”
It takes skill to weave hilarious with arousing. Don’t let us rush you, especially if taking your time means more chapters like this!
It takes skill to weave hilarious with arousing. Don’t let us rush you, especially if taking your time means more chapters like this!
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September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok the Clock is ticking.....
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September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i just reread the whole story hee hee ok i was a little rude to you i apologise all this drama is kind making me want to know what will happen i know now how kayla feels its sad but it seems Lee'na and her may become rivals for shr'locks affections oo cant wait this will be so cool but i still wanna know if he still loves Kayla his first mate becase he said he wa fighting his emotions for Lee'na im really confused can you clear some things up for me pwease
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September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I know Shyann! I'm sorry really it will be soon!
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September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well I hope the update is soon, because it doesnt look like Sh'lok and Kayla will make it.