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August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Now there is fighting and jealousy man what is she going ot do what Sh'lok suggested ?
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August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
shit. shit shit shit. damn.
sorry. must curse. mad at the both of them. if i were there I'd be nagging Shlok to fix this shit and I'd be yelling at Kayla to grow up and live with the consequences of her actions. Her idea for the 2nd mate, she's gotta deal.
had to giggle about banaj though all happy he can get fucked by the ooman now. LOL.
it's great that kulvir and kayla made up though. Maybe it's a case of admitting the anger that'll help him deal with it like a grownup.
can't wait for the next chapter, and I hope you update quickly.
sorry. must curse. mad at the both of them. if i were there I'd be nagging Shlok to fix this shit and I'd be yelling at Kayla to grow up and live with the consequences of her actions. Her idea for the 2nd mate, she's gotta deal.
had to giggle about banaj though all happy he can get fucked by the ooman now. LOL.
it's great that kulvir and kayla made up though. Maybe it's a case of admitting the anger that'll help him deal with it like a grownup.
can't wait for the next chapter, and I hope you update quickly.
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August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I agree with Caz that both need to grow up and deal, but I think that Sh'lok giving Kayla permission to go to Ban'aj hurt her even more.
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August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Looks like lee'na won i really really hate her now because now Sh'lock sees his first mate as the second poor kayla (cries) her heart is breaking and all she ever feels is deoression whats goonna happen please email me and tell me Shr'lock and Kayla still love each other cause these chapters lately have been upsetting me really really badly and i feel sick to my stomach from crying
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August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is awsome
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August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i agree with Kae'She this is sad
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August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love the story but im confused does Shlock still love kayla
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August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
dammit, what is it about mahavin that I find so damned sexy??? grr.
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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
too....damned...short.
:D
want more!
:D
want more!
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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I would like to see more on Shra'van. That was a surprise. So he actually do like his family in a twisted way. Kayla need to let go of the jealously.
Update soon, I want more!
Update soon, I want more!