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Please give us more soon! I need my fix!

Another amazing chapter as always. You are one of my favorite authors. I hope you update soon!

Cathy2u, I will have to say you are correct in one of your assumptions. I'm just not telling which one (slap my hand)

ok so Sh'lok is going to kill Kul'vir isn't he? And Ta'noj is so sweet he is going to turn evil or break Kaylas heart. And has Lee'na really changed over the years?
more soon!!

DANG!!!!! I know you got more, and I hope you are writing it as I type. Great stuff!!!

Wow, poor Su'tara! Lo'kesh is good yajuta to have around. I'm glad Kayla has admitted to being jealous, but what will Sh'lok do now that he knows it was Kul'vir that put the thoughts in her head. Another battle?
Thanks for the double update!

OH MY GODS!! Su'tara! You know I didn't like that dude. Just reminded me of the jerks from high school. Dude deserved what he got, and so did his brother.

I feel a very tangled web is about to unravel. If the truth about Kul'vir being Su'tara's father comes out then his own parentage is bound to get out as well.

Umm isn't t about time you grace us with a new chapter? pleaseeeeee

I recall Ne'el saying eye contact meant little to Leena and she seemed to see Ooman females as lesser than a yautja female.'Course not mother she is Ooman' she said to her mother. She assured Kayla she wouldn't take her life not her place nevermind the double meaning. I see Shravan getting his butt kicked in lesson by Lex's son upon their visit. Or by Kayla if he disrespects Kayla while announcing Leena as his mother instead of Kayla. I doubt the Jafren will believe Kayla is Shlok's true mate, and may test them. An amorous Human male warrior of old living among the Jafren becoming smitten with her might do the trick reminding Shl'ok who his love is. Okay so I'm reaching! His comparing Kayla to Leena can't be a good sign. Someone like Mahavin needs to remind him of why Kayla cannot be compared to any other females. Kayla shouldn't expect him to mate another female, if she doesn't want him to love her as well. What will Shl'ok do when he finds out Leena is a gossip who can't keep her mouth shut about personal stuff as Ne'el did? I'm rambling big time. See all the emotional gut twisting this story does to me!? I love it! Thankyou for the great update.

So the jealously begins. Uh-oh
Will Ba'naj confort her?