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July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Kayla but she was told wasn't she. Go Lo'kesh and I still want Ba'naj, the dirty old Yautja hotty.
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July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn that was a good chapter. I hate to be such a perv but, will anything happen between Leena and Kayla? This chapter was awesome update soon!
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July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness! Dang that was good! MORE RITUALS! So if Ba'naj have three mates how did that one go? Flashback perhaps? Kul'vir has a monkey on his back.
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July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was....Hottt! Shl'ok handled his buisness like the pro he is. Though he may be challenged for her later surprise maybe it will be Kul'vir. The only way he can have her, really. Leena may become pregnant and get creepy obsessive again, once she thirsts for power of Kayla's position. What will happen when she sees Ne'el again but as a leader's mate? Will she do some underhanded crap to him, or will Kulvir attempt to seduce Shl'ok's new mate or befriend her to stay close to Kayla? I have no idea and that is why I love this story. This is Great stuff!!! Hottt!
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July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Two words...HOT DAMN.
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July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn Girl!! You sure do know how to write. Some one needs to kick Kul'vir's ass. It should be Kayla. Definately! Can't wait for more, not so long this time?!
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July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
DAMN, CAN IT GET ANY HOTTER!
That was juicy. Now the question is Kayla and Ba'naj perhaps? Hmm
I'm so hooked. I have to go back and read this chapter again. And Lo'kesh is a hard ass now!
That was juicy. Now the question is Kayla and Ba'naj perhaps? Hmm
I'm so hooked. I have to go back and read this chapter again. And Lo'kesh is a hard ass now!
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July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I check this site once a day for updates to your story. It is a soap opera and I'm hooked! I think Su'tara is going to be a handfull for poor Kayla.
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July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Kul'vir! Love is driving him crazy and now that Kayla is no longer friends with him he may really go off on the deep end!
Ba'naj is scrumptious! Him and Kayla need a moment. Maybe at the ritual? Or will he prepare her again in the future?
Ba'naj is scrumptious! Him and Kayla need a moment. Maybe at the ritual? Or will he prepare her again in the future?
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July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Kayla is jealous from a kiss; an intimacy she thinks she cannot share with him. Kiss his mandibles girl..come on. She is going to regret this, especially when Shravan acts out. Leena may see Stephna as a threat. Great tension and angst. I see Shravan coming face to face with some of Lex's brood maybe? Something his little brother might appreciate better? Poor Kulvir in unrequitted love hell, with a splash of consuming jealousy on the side. I so want to console and slap some sense into him. I can't give up on him yet y'all! I love this story and the characters. Thanyou for updating.