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Thank you for the reviews!
LovyDovy: He's not being framed. They kind of make it through and it's not Kul'vir because he's dead! I didn't tell you too much did ? (smile)

Vanthegreat: I'm not sure when I will post. I wanted to catch up on a little reading and I'm still in the midst of writing the finial story.

I'm glad you all (well most) like it :)

So how close to posting are you ;)

I had to read a chapter back but it was worth it! Dead!!! Kayla. Oh you must explain this to me because that is tragic stuff.

That is indeed a fucking cliffy!! But I love the new story already. I also admire the way you ended Human Hunter 2. Thank you so much for sharing your writing and I can't wait to read the new story.

Heh, if circle's writings are a source of unpleasantness for you sir, then I certainly am hoping she keeps it up for as long as she can. :)

More praise from me, since I've gone back and re-read some of the chapters in light of the story change. I dunno if you had planned the latest twist a while back, but even if you didn't it shows how well your writing is that you can make it into a believable situation and not come off as forced. Example, the Jafren seemed to imply something bad for Kayla in the future when talking about her "fate", and then there's Tanoj's former cute introduction of being the son of Shlok and Kayla, which has now turned into a call for death, and he now using her cause of death (the fatal injury) to kill others.

Oh well, I - and most sane people here - am so glad you will keep writing, I can't wait for the first chapter of Part III :)

Hey circle what is worse than having a flamer?

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Having one that can not spell. Come on sequal? Dude are you spelling it like it sounds or something. You have the nerve to criticize others for grammar and spelling.
***shaking head

OOOOO! Can't wait! No, I really mean that. But...that is not the end i was expecting! Kudos to you for writing a tragedy. :)

A triology baby, yeah! Tanoj on earth or is he being framed? I doubt it would've been Kulvir were he living or not. Looking forward to it, but you deserve a vacation. Fantastic work!

Did Shlok and Leena make it through Kayla's death? Hope he makes Kayla's killer pay. With intrigue like this you simply must update regular. Don't make us beg you....we will.

Ok, first off, a nice final chapter to this part of the saga. Tied everything up nicely and set the stage for your next story arc (you say it will be the final story, but again, hopefully it won't be the last thing you write :) ).

Now then, about the teaser, *puts on Keanu Reeves face* "Whoa...."

Damn, talk about a complete 180 as well as quite the stunning turnabout. Killing off the main character, making the lovable son into a crazed bad blood, and who knows what else (you mentioned Kul'vir also dieing, that'll be interesting to see). A testament to your writing is emoting the pain the characters felt in Tan'oj's short flashback. Well, I definitely cannot wait to read that story and see what went down. Though I do hope Ban'aj does make an appearance. Pervy-Yautja must survive! :)

At the very least, one certainly cannot say that you have not breathed new life into the story (through death, hehe)

thanks Death God Dist!
It is completely different and Ba'naj is in it.
I love the Keanu faces!