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i have a question please tell me sh'lock still loves kayla??? im confused i have a headache is this gonna end up kayla's whole family and her mate will hate her and she will leave for earth heart broken although i do love this fanfic i hope this isnt gonna be devistating and argumentative

Since you have a headache I'll help you out :)
I think Sh'lok will always love Kayla, though sometimes it may not come across as such (I'm no help huh)!
devistating and argumentative... I don't think so... well, I do love drama... let me think...
Nah :)

My my my, Ba'naj is hot. Tell me a ritual is next! Oh Please!!!
I love this story.You write out your drama and conflicks very well. MORE!!

That Ba'naj is beginning to sound scrumtious. Sh'lok taking a second mate is something I didn't expect, with the possibility of a third (or was his talk with Kul'vir just an empty threat). Hmm, how is Kayla going to feel once she really does have to share.

Yay! Another ritual! I love rituals. Bring on the ritual!!

I read Hunter 1 & 2 and they are absolutely amazing. You have a lot of talent. Did you make up the mating rituals and some of the yautja behaviour or did you research it? Either way, the culture and society added greatly to the story. I was hooked.
I love how each of your characters are so original! It's amazing.
I love Sh'lok and Kayla...but I'm disappointed about Lee'na. I don't want Sh'lok to start feeling for her and abandon Kayla...or take her as a second mate or something....haha. That's how much I'm wrapped up in the plot. Sh'lok and Kayla are so perfect together...they have to last!!
Please write the next chapter please please :(
Shame on you and your story for making me beg! :P






Pretty please?

Awesome chapter! Things are getting exciting and I can't wait to see what happens. Plase update soon!! I'll cry if you don't.

Kulvir's gonna get it. Watch out Lo'kesh cause I'm rooting for you! Kayla may be moving on dangerous ground with Leena, but she may be like Shlok..emotional for a yautja. How will Kulvir's mate take the news of Shlok's second mate, or her kids for that matter. Will Leena's family become involved? Will Kul'vir ever come clean to Kayla how he really feels? Will his mate stop disrespecting him with Shlok knowing he is no longer friendly with him? I love not knowing and this story keeps the twists coming. Great update...two chappies!!!

I am so happy that you are writing another fic! I can tell this will be just as great as the last one. Ta'noj needs a little help and for some wacky reason I like Shra'van. I can totally see Shlok and Leena, but how will Kayla deal with that? Run to someone else perhaps?

Kul'Vir is in for an asskicking...