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Poor Tanoj. Awww Shlok may need more than
leena can give him emotionally. Will her friend step in to console him? Leena's son jealous of the others having Kayla as mother, or inherited crazy? That rapist's surviving brother kill kulvir and Kayla for starting this all in motion by meeting? Jealous females getting another to do dirty work? With Kayla and her mate Kulvir gone one certain Shlok pinning female might have her chance to replace Kayla? A member of Ne'el's family? Bastard son of Shlok jealous or offended by connection to an "inferior" species? Or upset Tanoj part Human has the lovely Kavita? The Eta Kala corrected when first met Lokesh? So many possible motives and players like a who done it novel to come? I'm rambling as usual. Bless you for doing another. Kayla will be missed.

How come Kayla had to die? Didn't even get to mate Shlok with Leena. All she got was his digits no pun intended. Sorry, still don't like Leena. Great storytelling!

Another human entering the saga maybe? Tanoj is not bad blood, just hunting down human killers for his human mother?! What of it, I say. Hope he isn't, and rather protecting his mother's people from human haters.

Why Kulvir dead? Did he die trying to protect Kayla? I had hoped he'd find love before he died. Can't wait to find out.

From what I gathered from the teaser. Kayla's death took place at least 100 years after the final chapter of Part II (as indicated, it had been that long since Shra'van had moved to Lex's ship, which had yet to take place at the end of Part II), and therefore, the next chapter will take place 100 years (according to Ta'noj's memory) after her death, meaning about 200 years after Part II.

I would have suspected Kul'vir if he wasn't dead, so my money is on Ne'el or someone close to him, though I have a feeling it will be someone completely unexpected.

Oh well, RIP Kayla, you gave us great times :) I wonder how well Sh'lok was able to move on?

My bad! I forgot that notation of their joining for a hour of no smutty details. You tease. I had visions of Shlok riding Kayla's curves while recieving a Leena full body massage or draped down the lenth of his back while he rode Kayla. Now that would be hot. Too hot....and kinky. Great story Again. Can't sing your praises enough to readers. I have feasted on your words and am satisfied.

Baxter, you unbelievable wanker, I pulled my story because I didn’t like being a lightening rod for all your negativity. So blame me.

Your right, you should be able to speak your mind about posts, but there is a way to do it. You don’t have to be so cutting and caustic! Why can’t you appreciate that? People don’t like to be told, “You suck” at every turn. Be decent. Be a man.

I hate to give this guy more attention than he deserves (which is none), but I couldn't help but laugh at the fact that the only story he's even remotely had a good liking to is "mating seasons". I think that speaks for itself quite well.

Anyway, back on topic. Story is awesome, Ba'naj kicks ass, and I hope you never stop writing. :)

*laughin*

what *is* this crap?

everything is going so fast to being tied up ina neat little sugary bow! its so sugary its good thing no one is diabetic.i think 'gentlemango' is making fun of YOU.

Damn, if you don't like it, don't read it. If you have nothing constructive to say, don't say anything at all. Clearly you have issues if you feel the need to make such a useless statement as a public review, when it would be better off as a private e-mail, since you clearly have some sort of grievance with the author. Of course, that would have required some simple intelligent thinking on your part, which by your history, you have great difficulty doing.

Anyway, I doubt circle or anyone else will take a word you say seriously after this (not that they took you seriously to begin with).

And circle, most of us here can't wait to read your final chapter, and whatever other writings you will hopefully come up with in the future.

***giving baxter a big ole hug and kiss!!*
because I know you love the sweets!
wait until you read the end.

And the big balls of the year goes to.... Shra'van! lol
I think he is more gutsy than any of them. And I do feel a part three. Please let there be a part three. Shra'van causing havoc on Scar and Lex ship. Lee'na is a curious one. I think if she likes you then you are fine but if she has issues with you then you should watch your back. She went psycho on Ne'el and his mate, which I thought was well deserved since her one year punishment last twenty five years. I just love this story and I find myself thinking about your characters and their situations. I hate to see it end!