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Guess Leena is staying...for now? She should have apologized, then I would've felt a little different about her for what she attempted if by principle only. If not his mate than to the child. Ne'el should've apologized to Leena for the role he played in it. I had actually grown reluctantly fond of him in that other version despite the creepy fetish thing. Okay so dominating your mate isn't that freaky these days.

Shlok needs to watch out, Leena is still dangerous. Maybe she has changed...brain not accepting data, but I will try to make that leap of faith. One day he'd need someone like her cause humans don't live as long as them. Since Kayla chose her, I'll try to be happy for that creepy little wench. Shlok's loving is working miracles. So is this author I now bow to. Almost over...say it ain't so! Hopefully, maybe grace us with another story with new characters, or Lex and Scar? I can only hope.Hint.

Wow, so that makes it, what, one more chapter to go before this grand story ends? It is sad, but I guess there is only so much one can write using the same characters for so long. Like others here, I will be hoping for future stories from you, with perhaps some of the other characters from your universe.

That said, what a great chapter. Jeez, that Ba'naj truly is one pervy-Yautja (but it is what makes him so endearing), and you had me rolling on the floor at Kayla's attempt to talk like him. And boy, has Shra'van really come around, takes courage to stand up to someone like Sa'tesh.

Oh well, I look forward to seeing how the story ends. I just hope you do keep writing afterwards.

Can I just say I want Ba'naj!
I can't believe it's one chapter left and i just want to see more of Ba'naj... so nasty :)
Also Lee'na is still evil. Just in her own sweet way! hooray!! lol And Shra'van wow, he really changed for the better. That ass kicking did him right.

Yay! Another great chapter. I am so glad everything is working out for everyone. I love happy endings. I can't wait for the next update! :)


P.S. Don't let that jerk-off Baxter get you down. Your work is awesome! Don't let anyone tell you different! :)

Um, yes...
can you please come back. I'm going through withdraws! :)
And don't kill Lee'na!

Yes Shlok and Kayla. Dare I hope Leena gets jealous enough to make Shlok kick her to the curb. Absolute power corrupts, especially when her yautja female pride is chafed in the gossip circles.

That could be another story from different angle. Shravan and Emmi's trials. Then we'd get cameo appears.

Maybe even You know Leena and Kulvir. Why not cause he has ETA issues, and she was one. His mate wants Shlok instead and a perk...Kayla's his best friend. I see drama there.

Okay I get enough is enough, but consider another one please. I've grown to care what happens to your characters. I will sincerely miss reading about them.Write on..I can only hope. This is so good I'll beg for more later.

I too am eagerly anticipating an update, though I know well enough that good things come to those who wait, it still won't stop me from being eager (like I'm eager for a Wii, though that seems to be not happening soon either :)

Anyway, in general I hope that the Predator-story-section's new home at the bottom of the movie list won't adversely affect viewership.

And uh, love your story too! :)

Gagan was justified in his suspicions of what happened with Kayla and Mahavin given her continuing care of his wellbeing in my humble opinion.
Stephna never said she cared for Kulvir beyond his elder's son status. Leena had been wronged, but her response to the new mate was so much worse. She is selfish enough to try to kill an unborn, so how will she take Shlok shifting his expression of affection back to his ooman mate? As I recall Leena has yet to see Shlok mate Kayla at all.
Will her green-eyed monster reveal itself to Shlok. It seems that lady Sutara was right about her strangeness. Maybe they will live happily threesome after...kidding. So happy my girl made up with her warrior, but so sad that the ride is coming to it's end.

Ok when are we going to see a Update..

Wow I'm happy with this. Has Leena been cheating with Chems to gain Shlok's affection? Complications but fit enough to party....hmmm. I see delicious drama coming from one not so innocent. More soon please!