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You had better continue with this young lady, hint, hint, nudge, nudge, wink, wink.

can we say update?
please?
:)
with sugar on top!

This is tooooo much Drama and I love it.
Please post more soon...

I like this story.Its got a lot of DRAMA and I have discovered that I like that! It is to the point and not dragging. I love your characters and everything that goes with them. Did Kayla have a brain fart or something suggesting Sh'lok take another mate? * shaking head *Kill Leena I don't care how Please get rid of her Please!!!. This is my second story that I have read in this section and I must say you made me want to read more Predator fanfiction. Please continue

I don’t like Leena but I also don’t like Kayla right now. Why is Sh’lok being punished for doing what she TOLD him to do? Kayla is the one that told him to take her on as a second mate instead of asking that she be restored to her previous holding or something else OTHER than bringing her into her home and bed.

I hope Leena flips out again and tries to carve up Kayla giving her a nice exit or maybe she’ll try and hook up with Gagan as some kind of revenge. Maybe that baby is not even Sh’lok’s. Whatever happens just send her ass packing please.

LOL... thank you Danny,
You're so passionate!
Thanks for all your reviews!

Another perfect and amazing chapter. I love your fic and I itch with anticipation for every update. I really like Gagan and Shlok, and I don't know who I would pick either. I can't wait to see what happens, so please update soon!!

Another excellent chapter.

I was so excited to read more of this story...the sequel you know. I like the fact about Sh'lok and Kayla, but now....I can't stand the sight of Leena. I think I don't like her because of what happened in the other ending where she almost killed Kayla and her baby.

So now that she's the second mate and having a baby....it really bugs me. you're the writer and all, but I was so pissed to see that Sh'lok took on another mate when it was suppose to be only them. Kayla was so stupid to even suggest that.

Leena should DIE!!! clears throat. Sorry...being a little hostile here. I really loved it and it pained me to read how Sh'lok was favoring Leena. I really hate her!!! and Sh'lok for being the typical male, in any species.

I truly love your work...I just don't like LEENA!!!!!!!

Bi#$#!!!!!!

lol...sorry.

PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE . I LOVE YOUR STORY . THE WRITING AND PLOT ARE GREAT .