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circle_Of_addictions come on please you said we wouldn't have to wait for the next chapter to long. Well were waiting please help us and post I gotta see whats going to happen.

I'm sorry! I did say that didn't I! Posting...

Wow. Could things get any more twisted? I'm sure they could... I love this fic and can't wait to see what happens next. Carry on... :)

damn my heart literally jumped when i saw you had updated. i love this story, even with all the drama.
but i still believe that sh'lok and kayla are perfect. all couples have problems, and i never did like ga'gan. she moved on with her life and now she has several kids. it would be hard for them if ga'gan was to be their father.
if you keep up with these cliff hangers i just might die. :(

Let Gagan and Kayla find closure and move on. Shlok and Kayla belong together. Thought Leena had beautiful, but emotionally flat eyes? So why would the emotional Shlok be so attracted to her, unless what sutara said was true. Maybe Leena reminds Shlok of Kayla too? Mahavin never gave up on Kayla that way. By letting her go I felt he loved her the most of all, besides Kulvir of course. Great stuff, I can't wait to find out what the Jafren want.

Kayla gave Leena Shlok by pushing him away. She has not been using her brain or wiles. Shlok should have real competition for her, Kulvir. Shlok needs to see that submissive behavior in Kayla will get her killed. Kayla needs to bombard him with stimulation and affection, then not give him none, let him wear Leena out til she starts to complain maybe argue, then move in for the kill with mind-blowing mating frenzy that will make him suck his thumb and call her momma? She needs to get into the game cause Leena has been taught well. I like Nalam for Gagan, can't wait to read what you decide. I love these characters.

I've read through this first story as well, and I can't wait for your next chapter! Does Shlok love Kayla, Leena, or both? The heart doesn't love equally, so he must favor one. More than words say it is Leena from what I've been reading. The Jafren's interest in humans is creepy.

That was evil, and I liked it. Well as long as you update regularly I won't die from withdrawal. What will Shlok do? Seems maybe his interlude with Kayla may be too little too late. Hope not. Congrats on handling so many dynamics of this story so well. Is there some significance to Leena having access to communication room. Did she eliminate her competition for Shlok?

Why ya'll hatin' on Leena she is so sweet and innocent..unless your in her way. As long as she is first things will be right in her world. Frankly I'm surprised she doesn't seem at all bitter over anything. Is it an act? Will Leena entertain Shlok's moments of weakness like Kayla does? Your good at making us suffer soap opera style. Great plots and turns for many chapters to come I hope.

I know, it was evil eh? (slapping hand) you will not wait long for the next one :)
Thanks so much for the reviews~~~!!!