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I'm so glad you added another chapter to your fic. I can't wait till the next chapter. I want to know what will happen between Gagan and Kayla.

Nalam forgets technically she is Gagan's second mate. Shlok may not have to give Kayla her walking papers. Has Leena truly gotten over Ne'el, afterall she tried to kill over him? I kinda feel bad for her, but she has Shlok's heart now. I would like to see how she takes all the females of the ship drooling over him like they did on the other ship. I think he'd find her jealousy way worse than Kayla's is. Stop giving Kayla a reason to be jealous you sexy bastard! What does Stephna really want from Shlok?

So the truth has at last been told - what will they do - will they revive their former relationship?

What are the Jafren up to and what do they want with Kayla?

So many questions to be answered - I love your story!!!

Forgive this second post, but why crzy Leena? Stop feeling sorry for Leena cause she isn't right. Jealous or not you don't try to murder a pregnant woman. She got what she deserved becoming an eta minus the rapes. What of her family, have her mother encouraged her to turn Shlok from Kayla? Kayla wouldn't have suggested the second mate had she known Shlok was genuinely interested in Leena. He said there would be no favoritsm shown, but only gives Kayla sloppy second if any. As long as shlok favors her I will hate her for Kayla. Please, Kayla is coming off as a wanton slut like shlok used to be at times. Let her show some resolve. Make Gagan fight Shlok for her by wooing her away. Shlok better watch out for Ne'el when he figures in.

Oh my goodness, so the jafren are shapeshifters? Are you going to tell what the hidden plan is? You have to tell you know! Are they out to kill the whole species? UGh! I have to wait don't I? lol
Keep it comin!

How can I express how amazing this story is? It doesn't even feel like fan fiction. It's practically a novel in its own right. Until now, I never liked Ga'gan very much. I didn't think he was worthy of Kayla. But, now that he's being given a second chance, I'm warming up to him much more. This may be a result of your expert storytelling by shaking up her and Sh'lock 's relationship... so now, anything is possible. Actually, you're giving a number of characters second chances. Excellent way to keep the story going and bring in new plot elements! And finally, we get to the Jafren. Very exciting! Keep it up!! (sorry for the rambling)

Ah the plot thickens. I really need to know what the Jafren have in store. Need more circle.of.addictions. But I shall be patient.

The Jafren are up to something. Something not so good.

Shra'van has a damn big mouth. Mom may need to slap him down again.

You make us wait so long and only give us a taste of what is to come?
Pure evil! :(

Poor Na'lam. She is feeling how Kayla felt.
Interesting chapter...I wonder how Sh'lok will react to Ga'gan.

I never understood why Shlok never kissed Kayla with his mandibbles rubbing her lips? I think he loves Leena now not Kayla and it shows. I love the angst in the story. Kulvir should give him Stephna and take Kayla. Gagan never could handle her often enough. Then again Mahavin may still want her, biding his time? How will Ne'el and family react to Leena, and will she still want Shlok once he looses leadership cause Gagan is back!? Does Shlok really prefer his females docile in 'I like whatever you like' mode? Will Kayla leave for another clan? So many questions. Loving this story and I just hope Kayla finds true happiness by its end. Please update soon.