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November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hot, hot, hot, hot! I hope you`ll update soon again!
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November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg! more!
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November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOSH!!! I don't think I have laughed so hard in a very long time. The first half was sososo damned funny! And of course, you certainly know how to write a wonderful sex scene! I can't wait to see what you come up with next. :D
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November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oi, so tell me, darling... where be the next chapter? Don't torture us in this manner. =) Tee hee.
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October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Deron is adorable in a naughty kind of way. Once yautja females get wind of their males seeking alternative mates what will they do? Will they keep it secret or will it bring them opportunity to sire the next generation of warriors? Considering their culture I'd understand. Great scenes, and the different kiss. Too many authors are scared to have the pairing kiss working with what has been given. Love your story and the heat.
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September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. Deron is relentlously naughty sweet and lecherously fun. You deserve praise and more reviews. Keep going cause I wonder if Sam will be okay with them reproducing with female yautjas in their arrangement? For now I'm getting a kick out of Deron's antics. More please.
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September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Score. Another hot, hot and steamy chapter. I only lament that there isn't ten new chapters every time you update, but hey... I'm just greedy like that. =) As always, your writing is really nice to read, and I like the small details you work into it, clues to your ideas about the Yautja. Like the hot and cold spurts, and the new growth on their dreads. Sex AND snazzy detail, doesn't get much better than that. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter.... and yes indeed, what about Deron and Maria? Can't wait to find out... =)
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September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! new chapter ^^ i love this story, please update soon! i can't wait to see if they actually explore the whole 'sandwich' thing and what will happen when she goes away with them, lol, very good story, go you!
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August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
finally i have been waiting a long time for the next chapter, don't keep me in suspence for so long it's not good for my heart. LOL
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August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I Love it. Please keep it up.