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February 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad to see this story is back! Write more soon, I'm enjoying Lex's further adventures!
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January 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i hope that you didnt discontinued this story. its very good and i really want to know what happens next! i read part one in one sitting and i loved it, i couldnt wait to start part too and now that i finished what you have so far i want to read more T_T please continue it!!
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January 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
will there be more written if so plz email me. i hope there is it seems so sad if it ends here.
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September 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh I love this story. Lex is fantastically feminine but strong and Scar is so masculine and yummy. lol. I love seeing how their relationship is progressing. Is Ragtok going come back into the story and actually like Lex because I am guessing once the Yaujta men starting seeing that Lex is not only a strong (as see defeated the toughest warrior) but beautiful, she will probably become a desirable mate especially as she becomes more and more accepted into the clan. Oh I am excited, it will be interesting to see a jealous Scar! hahaha. Your writing is splendid!
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August 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is just as good as the first one!
i love all the action it as well!
i love all the action it as well!
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August 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very very nice chapter! What I really enjoy about your writing is how well you portray the Yautja as immense physical powerhouses and the sheer force and extreme power they exhude, especially when dealing out damage. :)
Poor Lex, she's really getting beaten up now, even after she went through all that to earn her place, guess things won't be so accomodating at the start, though at least it seemed as though her actions were starting to win others over. Lex's inner dialog is really funny, especially when she's trying so hard not to imagine doing anything "innapropriate" with Scar, or just imagining about him in general, seems she just can't keep her eyes off of him. :D
BTW, Scar is really awesome, again, you write him in such a way that he just is quite the badass and so powerful. The way he took out that annoying guy was just awesome, you do a great job putting him in action. I hope he will be able to tolerate Lex whenever she may get into her moods. Hopefully they can figure each other out without too much "discomfort" :)
Again, great chapter, so glad you are really continuing with this. Can't wait for more!
-DGD
Poor Lex, she's really getting beaten up now, even after she went through all that to earn her place, guess things won't be so accomodating at the start, though at least it seemed as though her actions were starting to win others over. Lex's inner dialog is really funny, especially when she's trying so hard not to imagine doing anything "innapropriate" with Scar, or just imagining about him in general, seems she just can't keep her eyes off of him. :D
BTW, Scar is really awesome, again, you write him in such a way that he just is quite the badass and so powerful. The way he took out that annoying guy was just awesome, you do a great job putting him in action. I hope he will be able to tolerate Lex whenever she may get into her moods. Hopefully they can figure each other out without too much "discomfort" :)
Again, great chapter, so glad you are really continuing with this. Can't wait for more!
-DGD
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August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely....its wonderful, its great. and the HMS will happen soon between them I hope.
Great story
Great story
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August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I must start by offering my most sincere apologies. This story has been on here for a while, yet I did not bother to read it. Boy, did I not realize what I was missing. This story is awesome. It also helps having just recently watched the movie again too. :)
I love the way you crafted the alternate timeline from the original source, it definitely seems believable to me anyways. You have a great attention to detail which you showed off spectacularly with the fight scene, such things are very difficult to write because you have to try to get the reader into the moment and get them to imagine what is going on just by reading. But you pulled it off flawlessly.
So yes, pretty please (with sugar on top!), do continue this story. I just loved the final scene that seems to be hinting at some nice hot tension brewing between them. Oh, and though the story will center around the Scar/Lex pairing, I would just love to see a Rave/Lex pairing to spice things up even more. (cause those two have real chemistry too IMO) :)
Again, bravo, and sorry I didn't find this sooner!
-DGD
I love the way you crafted the alternate timeline from the original source, it definitely seems believable to me anyways. You have a great attention to detail which you showed off spectacularly with the fight scene, such things are very difficult to write because you have to try to get the reader into the moment and get them to imagine what is going on just by reading. But you pulled it off flawlessly.
So yes, pretty please (with sugar on top!), do continue this story. I just loved the final scene that seems to be hinting at some nice hot tension brewing between them. Oh, and though the story will center around the Scar/Lex pairing, I would just love to see a Rave/Lex pairing to spice things up even more. (cause those two have real chemistry too IMO) :)
Again, bravo, and sorry I didn't find this sooner!
-DGD
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July 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Should you continue? SHOULD YOU CONTINUE! *screams* YES! *points at Liltinybee review* What she said! Also why do all the good writers in the this area update alot and then suddenly drop of the grid?!!?!?! Its annoying but understandable at the same time! Life gets in the way or writers block; so much can keep someone away from writing but I beg you don't leave this story undone!! It is one of few good ones out there and did I say that I am in awe at your fighting scenes! Gods above and below! I dream of being able to write fight scenes like that! I'm begging you please! Update and don't leave this story undone!!!!!
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July 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, please say you'll continue the story!! I have been waiting years to read more!! This was the first story in the fandom that I read and it's been my fave even till now. You have a great talent for writing action. Plus, you're just starting to explore Lex and Scar's relationship now. Please please write more!!