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*SIGHS* I bloody cried !!! lol twice !! lol amazing I loved it I cried !! lol and then I squealed lol and then I cried and and then I sighed and smiled and sighed again lol Great story both of them !!

Absolutely loved it!! I almost burst into tears! Really great story, so full of pure love and determination. I hope you write more fics soon.

That was so incredible. The tension you build is amazing. I wish it wasn't the end though. Please write me another story!

Loved this story!!! A beautiful sequel to The Undoing of Jack. I hated the way Norrington's navy men treated Jack's lover and destroyed their home, which they shared together. It was very sad as you described how they demolished everything Jack made and bought for her in the home. I knew Jack would be outraged and would stop at nothing to save his love.

Her love for Jack was truly beautiful and she was willing to give her life for him. No doubt in her mind to keep him safe. Very lovely!!! The rescue was clever but the way you made us believe Jack was dead was a real heartwrencher. I truly felt his loves sorrow and anguish. Well done!!

The ending was brilliant as he made his comment of crying because of something he had done and she thought she was dreaming. I jumped for joy. Yay! They are finally together and can live happily ever after. Great Job!!!!!