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July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I read the whole thing in one sitting, fantastic writing style, very capturing. Loved it! ^_^
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May 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story line. Can't wait for the next installment!
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August 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, this is the second time I'm reading this fic, and it is just as wonderful as the last time that I read it! :) I am definitely looking forward to the sequel, but *sigh* it has yet to appear. I hope that you are well!
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April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow... you had me going back and forth there for a while. Poor Cass... I cried as she ran from the house... just knowning that he struck again and it was her niece this time. I could feel her pleasure and disgust as she killed Burns... and the hate from Vek when he found out that she was raped... i shuddered at teh thought of even imagining that glare... it was a wonderfully well written and thought out action drama and i certainly can not wait for part 2 =] ... i shall eagerly awaitt he next chapter of this saga
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September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God, Prairiefire, I want to apologize for one of my reviews. I was looking over what I wrote and I made a terrible blunder. When I wrote that your work was superfluous, it was a collasal mistake. I meant superlative. Please forgive me. I think your story is superlative! It’s excellent! Geez, I feel like such a bonehead now. Chalk it up to it being late at night, and I was sleepy and didn’t pay attention to what my spell check was fixing my spelling to. Yikes. Forgive me.
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September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No problem SBH. I got the meaning.
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September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 18
Wow again! Now this chapter was not stop action! I absolutely loved it!!! Again your action scenes are superb! I really think "Predator 3" should have been your story instead of the dismal “Predator vs. Alien” clunker. I was completely riveted reading this and I’m delighted about what happened to Cach and Burns. I knew this was going to be good with all of them coming together, but really, great job!!! Now I need to go read chapter 19 and see what is going to happen with Cass. Yikes!
Wow again! Now this chapter was not stop action! I absolutely loved it!!! Again your action scenes are superb! I really think "Predator 3" should have been your story instead of the dismal “Predator vs. Alien” clunker. I was completely riveted reading this and I’m delighted about what happened to Cach and Burns. I knew this was going to be good with all of them coming together, but really, great job!!! Now I need to go read chapter 19 and see what is going to happen with Cass. Yikes!
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September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 19
Now this was a non-stop action chapter too! And you describe everything so well! Do you get exhausted sometimes writing these I wonder?
“Nothing would keep him from killing the Bad Blood that dared to harm what was his.” Now I absolutely love the way Vek’rin’ka is so protective over Cass, considering her to be his. It just so...well you know...romantic. And Vek’rin’ka is such a badass, I love it! Of course you know already that I’m sweet on him. I wish someone like him would come and watch over me! (sigh) Of course he’d be bored to death if he did, but that’s not the point! lol
Al’brk’vix was a pig hurting Cass the way he did! I must say though, I am somewhat fascinated with the yautja’s much larger anatomy. I’m assuming Vek’rin’ka is built like that as well, right? lol
Now for the good part! I had been waiting for Vek’rin’ka to kick Al’brk’vix’s sorry ass, so this was great! Excellent fight at the end! And I think that Cass and Vek’rin’ka make a really good pair. I mean, she really is a badass herself and she helps Vek’rin’ka, instead of just waiting to be rescued, even when she is really hurt. I like that.
Anyway excellent chapter, as usual!!! Now I don’t want your story to end. :-(
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September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 20
All right, where’s part 2? lol
I absolutely loved this story Prairiefire and I love Vek’rin’ka too. I think you have done an amazing job bringing these two very different people together. And while they haven’t acknowledged it yet, you can tell that they love each other. The respect and trust shows in everything they do. This definitely is a different kind of love story and hot damn, it was very exciting too!
Excellent Job!! I bow to the master! I shall be waiting with baited breath for your next installment!
All right, where’s part 2? lol
I absolutely loved this story Prairiefire and I love Vek’rin’ka too. I think you have done an amazing job bringing these two very different people together. And while they haven’t acknowledged it yet, you can tell that they love each other. The respect and trust shows in everything they do. This definitely is a different kind of love story and hot damn, it was very exciting too!
Excellent Job!! I bow to the master! I shall be waiting with baited breath for your next installment!
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September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 16-17
Wow Prairiefire, I’m starting to get bummed now that I’m getting so much closer to the end. You have me so wrapped up in the world of Cass and Vek’rin’ka that I just want to keep reading.
Again I think you handle the relationship between Cass and Vek’rin’ka beautifully. You really do an excellent job of bringing them closer together and you do it with so few words. “I thought you left,” Cass says, and you really can feel the pain in her voice. Chapter 16 is mostly just those two getting to know each other and I loved it, especially the unveiling of Vek’rin’ka’s mask. After all, we all know Vek’rin’ka is rather startling to look at, but you made it seem so natural that Cass would accept him. Very nice!
And actually that is one thing I would like to bring up. You know at first I thought Sonya’s fate was really too harsh, but now I know why you did it. It was because Cass would never break the law otherwise. She also might not have been as open to Vek’rin’ka either. The shock and horror made her drop all her previous boundaries and beliefs, leaving her open to a new way of thinking. Great Job! Again I am impressed.
You had me worried there for a second when Vek’rin’ka went back to the ship, leaving Cass in the hotel room to play her guitar. I thought Al’brk’vix had come for her.
And I’m glad that Cach and his buddies beat the shit out of Burns. Burns really is rather stupid though if he thinks people will provide him with little girls. Even hardened criminals think child killers are scum of the Earth.
I’m glad that Vek’rin’ka smells a trap, that way he will be on his guard. It’s really starting to build now. All your characters, Al’brk’vix, Cach, Burns, Cass and Vek’rin’ka are all going to the same warehouse. This is going to be good, isn’t it!!
Excellent Job!
Wow Prairiefire, I’m starting to get bummed now that I’m getting so much closer to the end. You have me so wrapped up in the world of Cass and Vek’rin’ka that I just want to keep reading.
Again I think you handle the relationship between Cass and Vek’rin’ka beautifully. You really do an excellent job of bringing them closer together and you do it with so few words. “I thought you left,” Cass says, and you really can feel the pain in her voice. Chapter 16 is mostly just those two getting to know each other and I loved it, especially the unveiling of Vek’rin’ka’s mask. After all, we all know Vek’rin’ka is rather startling to look at, but you made it seem so natural that Cass would accept him. Very nice!
And actually that is one thing I would like to bring up. You know at first I thought Sonya’s fate was really too harsh, but now I know why you did it. It was because Cass would never break the law otherwise. She also might not have been as open to Vek’rin’ka either. The shock and horror made her drop all her previous boundaries and beliefs, leaving her open to a new way of thinking. Great Job! Again I am impressed.
You had me worried there for a second when Vek’rin’ka went back to the ship, leaving Cass in the hotel room to play her guitar. I thought Al’brk’vix had come for her.
And I’m glad that Cach and his buddies beat the shit out of Burns. Burns really is rather stupid though if he thinks people will provide him with little girls. Even hardened criminals think child killers are scum of the Earth.
I’m glad that Vek’rin’ka smells a trap, that way he will be on his guard. It’s really starting to build now. All your characters, Al’brk’vix, Cach, Burns, Cass and Vek’rin’ka are all going to the same warehouse. This is going to be good, isn’t it!!
Excellent Job!