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for Predator: SVU

by prairiefire

person aquamum
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent update.
i love your story.
Good to see them becoming closer - I love she sleeps on his stomach
person Death God Dist
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I had feared that this great story had been abandoned after so long without an update.

While I am glad you were finally able to come back to it, I am saddened to hear about your loss. It really sucks to lose such a close pet, and at this time of the year too. I wish you the very best in recovering from it.

I still love this story nonetheless, and the interactions between Cass and Vek are simply awesome. I can't wait for the next chapters, however long they may take.
person Cara
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAAAY. An update!!
Vek is starting to feel more protective towards Cass, and now they're going to hunt the Bad Blood. Interesting, interesting. Oh this plot is greeeeeeatttt. I love it. You're such a talented writer.
And I am so sorry about your dog. :/
Losing is a pet is like losing a human best friend. I know, my cat I had for seven years died awhile ago. Took me a few months to stop crying every time I thought of him. Time will heal this wound, and I hope you'll be okay.
-Cara
person shortest_warrior
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry to hear about your Lucky. I hate to think about losing my Lucky dog. We consider him to be our first child. Animals have always held a special place in my heart too and it's never easy when they go.

Take care of yourself wont you, I shall be thinking of you.

I loved this chapter, love the story. Vek and Cass interact well and I'm with Cara, your plot is great.

*Hello room service. Can I have one life-sized predator pillow to my room please?*
person Cara
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I haven't forgottten about this story either, and am glad your muse has shown up!
What do you mean there's not much left to this story?
:(
*tear*
Cara no want good story to end.
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi people! Let me just say I have good news and bad news.

Good news first. I have not given up on this story. Yay!!!!

Bad news. I have given up on Chapter 16. I decided that I didn't like what I had written so far so I ripped it out of my notebook and threw it in the garbage. So I am not quite starting from scratch. But between the crud happening at work and looking for a new job it's going to be a while for an update. Hang tight, there's not much left to the story.
person Lorna
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Update when you can with sugar on top
schedule September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice story. I will be looking for the next update.
person karmaxp
schedule September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh come on you know Vek HATES Cass! :) No really I like how they are progressing please continue
person aquamum
schedule September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another excellent chapter.
You story continue to be very interesting - well done !!!!!!!