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August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter. Vek's comforting embrace, he could've so easily thought it a weakness and dispatched her but I'm glad he didn't. Need more please.
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August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am soo totally into this story. I love it. It's like reading a novel. I can't wait to see what happens. I want to see the bad guys get the stuffing beat out of them and then I want to see the good guys get a little R&R together.
Oh, and there were only a few minor spelling errors, but hey, we're human! :)
Oh, and there were only a few minor spelling errors, but hey, we're human! :)
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August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww that was so sweet I loved it, He is soooo Good I hope you get them together.
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August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome awesome story. Please update or I just might die!!! :(
I love how you deal with the character's emotions and Vek'rin'ka is so sweet and funny. I really can't wait for the next chapter. The story is definetly a...page turner? You're writing is really good. I would have never known you were an amateur. The last chapter where Vek and Cass meet is heartwarming, yeah yeah corny.
-Cara
I love how you deal with the character's emotions and Vek'rin'ka is so sweet and funny. I really can't wait for the next chapter. The story is definetly a...page turner? You're writing is really good. I would have never known you were an amateur. The last chapter where Vek and Cass meet is heartwarming, yeah yeah corny.
-Cara
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August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! That was a great chapter! Hoping for more soon!
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August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hot diggety dog!!!! Would I love to be a fly on the wall for that conversation... Oh yeah you ARE SUPPOSED TO BE WRITING IT. Good stuff
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August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter. I liked how you described both their reactions too each other, and as always its interesting as you show the Predators point of view and describe his culture.
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August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You will all be happy to know that I will be updating soon. I just have to go through the chapters I have ready and insert the coding. You will definitely have chapter 12 tomorrow. The rest we will have to see.
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August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*taps feet some more* :D
make me
nah, this is good, this is as far as I"ve read before... now for some, you know, new stuff. mwahahha. *poke*
i wonder how the communication will go? or if she'll just outright attack him. lol
make me
nah, this is good, this is as far as I"ve read before... now for some, you know, new stuff. mwahahha. *poke*
i wonder how the communication will go? or if she'll just outright attack him. lol
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August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this will there be more soon?