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October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, this is a much better site to put this story on. Fewer restrictions than fanfiction.net.
I like the detail, extra dialogue, etc, you added to the scene where he killed Lorretta. It's interesting to see this story evolve as it's rewritten.
I like the detail, extra dialogue, etc, you added to the scene where he killed Lorretta. It's interesting to see this story evolve as it's rewritten.
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August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Keep up the good work. ;)
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July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice one. I always wondered what happen after Freddy killed his wife. I hope you countinue it.