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Words fail me. This is without exception the best thing I have ever read. And I have read the best. From Charles Dickens to Thomas Harris. This is the best. I hope you continue to write. I look forward to readying whatever you might wright next :)

This is a fabulously complex story and I'm disappointed to note that it hasn't been updated in over a year. Granted, I never even thought about a Hannibal/Will pairing before today, but curiosity brought me to this story and the wonderful way you've crafted this plot has kept me captivated. Lecter is such a complex character to write for and yet you've done an incredible job of keeping him both in character and writing such a pairing for him, making it very plausible to boot! I don't think I'll be able to watch any of the movies or read the books now without cheering for a little slash! The story itself is so intricate, characters developing and actions winding together in such a way that I can't help but feel you had something truly breath-taking in mind for a conclusion. I also love how nurturing Hannibal is to Will, comforting and frighteningly protective in a way that only Lecter can pull off. The episode with Willy was also so tragic, and certainly nothing good from Clarice and Molly in such close proximity to each other. It's a fascinating story that you have going here, and I can only pray that you haven't left it behind permanently, but perhaps on the back burner. Anyway, wonderful job on this story so far as you truly have a gift for writing! ~raises a glass~ Here's to hoping there are more excellent chapters like the ones that compose this story to come in the future!

Oh wow, this is just brilliant, the characterisations, the pace, the writing style and not to forget the superb plot! Please please continue this and if at all possible don't let Will be fatally skewered by Clarice, he is too good a character to be snuffed out in such a way.

So....after all that work I put in to making those CDs, why hasn't this been updated in more than a year?

Wow, I had to read this all in 1 day! Wonderful plot & charactarization. Can't wait for chap 9

Of course when I saw that you had posted a new chapter I had to reread them all..
So here I am at 3am and loving chapter 8. So the women have started their dance, I wish the men luck.
I do love how messed up Hannibal and Will are. All their oddness matches.

great story so far. my computer had to be reinstalled so i lost everything. I can't wait for the next update.

Boy was I excited when I saw this story was updated, my
computer is finaly fixed so I didn't have to print this
chapter to read it. What a chapter it was, I still can't
believe Will and Hannibal got caught, it surprised me,
he's usually so perceptive. I really liked the dream
Will had too, it was neat, and was a interesting way
to show what Will was feeling. Moll sure didn't take it
well when she found out, kinda like she was in denial or
something. I sure hope her and Clarece(?) don't cause too
much trouble for Will and Hannibal, they deserve a little
peace. Anyway keep up the good work and please update soon
*throws you magic cookie*

Yes, you updated. *does happy dance*
I loved this chapter just as much as the ones before. Especially the dream and the following confrontation with Molly. And the idea to have Molly and Clarice meet up is wonderful and really original.
But what I loved the most was Hannibal's comment, that he didn't want a bird if he could have an angel. That was so unbelievably beautiful.
I'm in love with this story, I absolutely am and I can't say that often enough.

Wow. The Last Temptation is the first Han/Will fiction I've read and I couldn't be happier.
I'm a big fan of your Hannibal and hope that the rest of your chapters are just as good.