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January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Omg, yay, I was so happy to see an update.
my internet has been down so I ended up printing off the chapter,
I read it a few times, it was great.
keep up the great work *throws you magic cookie*
my internet has been down so I ended up printing off the chapter,
I read it a few times, it was great.
keep up the great work *throws you magic cookie*
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January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey, love the story but sickle cell anemia is found in african americans only. willy is white.
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January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes, a new chapter and after reading it I can honestly say, that it was worth every second of the time I waited for it. Fabulous and definitely the best one yet. I can't even begin telling you all the thing I like about it, but a few things were simply outstanding:
1. I loved your Willy. I haven't read the books, so the altered relationship was new to me. But it fit your story perfectly. He's so insightful and the way he handles Hannibal, his maturity, is really wonderful. Plus his death was really "nice", a little sad, but also really fitting.
2. Hannibal drawing a castle for Will. That image made me smile, cause it's somewhat like the doctor to do such a thing. Plus the scene in the artshop was funny.
and 3. Their flirt in the bar. Just wonderful dialoge.
So, those were the bits I loved most. Now I'll patiently wait for the next chapter and cross my fingers that it will be just as good.
1. I loved your Willy. I haven't read the books, so the altered relationship was new to me. But it fit your story perfectly. He's so insightful and the way he handles Hannibal, his maturity, is really wonderful. Plus his death was really "nice", a little sad, but also really fitting.
2. Hannibal drawing a castle for Will. That image made me smile, cause it's somewhat like the doctor to do such a thing. Plus the scene in the artshop was funny.
and 3. Their flirt in the bar. Just wonderful dialoge.
So, those were the bits I loved most. Now I'll patiently wait for the next chapter and cross my fingers that it will be just as good.
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December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OOh you must make more chapters! this is brillent! I love how you have brought out the emotion's in them both!
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November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this story. It's so well written and the song lyrics are an added bonus. Please update whenever you find the time.
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September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The story is wonderful, I can't wait for the next chapter. You've kept true to the characters in a way most authors wouldn't. I have to admite I love what you've done to Clarice. A big BRAVO! for you. Hope to see the next chapter soon.
Lindsey
Lindsey
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September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
more please? maybe Clarice could threaten Willy and get put into a mental institute...or be killed.
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September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story I can't wait for the next chapter. I like the added touch of having his son in the story. Not a big deal but I watched Red Dragon Movie just this weekend and the son's name was Josh. I have never read the books but is the name different in the book. Anyway LOVE IT!
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September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay, an update, I love this story, it's so fascinating,
it really draws in your attention, can't wait to see what
happens next, so please update soon, pretty please
*throws you magic cookie*
it really draws in your attention, can't wait to see what
happens next, so please update soon, pretty please
*throws you magic cookie*
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August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wah...Great, great, great...*applaudsfuriously*
Another absolutely lovely chapter.
I loved the way Will talked about Clarice in the beginning, the whole lapdog/bird of prey thing is wonderfully fitting. And the scene with the Magaritas was beautiful and sexy, too. As was the dialog they had about it. I loved the fact that Will got one up on Han, at least for a short while.
And the thing with Willy...life just can't go well for Will once, can it? But at least Hannibal is there. The last sentence was another absolutely lovely addition, it fitted perfectly.
I hope you will continue soon.
darkangel985
Another absolutely lovely chapter.
I loved the way Will talked about Clarice in the beginning, the whole lapdog/bird of prey thing is wonderfully fitting. And the scene with the Magaritas was beautiful and sexy, too. As was the dialog they had about it. I loved the fact that Will got one up on Han, at least for a short while.
And the thing with Willy...life just can't go well for Will once, can it? But at least Hannibal is there. The last sentence was another absolutely lovely addition, it fitted perfectly.
I hope you will continue soon.
darkangel985