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for The Last Temptation

by CuxW

schedule August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I forgot to ask, if you could send me an email, when the next chapter is out.
My email is SueGoepfert@t-online.de.
Thanks.
person EricaH
schedule August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I love your story. I can't believe what a twist it is that Whilly is ill. It complicates everything. I wonder how Will is going to handle Hannibal and the bad news at the same time. Poor Will. Please update soon!
person Lina
schedule August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow!!! this was such a powerful chapter!!! amazing!!!
person Lina
schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!!!YOU ARE BACK!!!!!!! GREAT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!
person Mino
schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooooooooh I like this story so much so far!
please get a new chapter up soon, I really enjoyed
the last one. *throws magic cookie*
update soon please
person Simarillion
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Why hello! I read your new chapter and I have to say, well done! I like Will's inner torture and how he struggles with his past, present and future. That's really great.

About the posting on Livejournal, there is a community called lecter_slash (http://community.livejournal.com/lecter_slash). Go to the userinfo, you have to be logged in with your account of course, and click on 'join community'. The next step is going to take you to a page where you can choose to add the community to your friends or not. Pick which one you prefer and click on done/okay/enter. You are member of the community now and can post to it whenever you like.

To post: Go to update journal (as if you'd update your own). On the update page you find a dropdown menu were you can choose the journal you want to post to. Open the drop down and pick lecter_slash. Now you can write and post whatever you choose. When you are finished with your entry, click at the bottom 'post entry'. Your entry is now online and for everyone to see.

Enjoy posting!

Simarillion
person Shadowdog85
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AHHH! Their going to meet! I'm so happy, are they gonna get caught by Clarice, is Hannibal gonna stitch up Will's arm? Will he have to tie him down to do so? Awww I must have more!
person EricaH
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've been waiting for this for ages. So glad you updated. I really love your story, it's intriguing. I wonder what will happen when Hannibal and Will finally meet.
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wah, I haven't been to this side since ages, but when I finally come back, there's a new chapter.
This was even better than the chapters before, darker and somehow even a little deeper. The confrontation between Will and Clarice was great, especially her envy for him. Poor deluded girl having her dreams shattered...
And Hannibal is just wonderfully himself. I can't wait to see what will happen, when Will and him finally meet.
The Scene at the beginning was very sensual, but what I liked most about the whole chapter was that you once again wrote about the wings and how differently Clarice reacted to them.

So, I hope that the next chapter would be out soon. Could you write me a short mail, when it's out? At the moment I rarely visit here and I don't want to miss it.

darkangel985
person Shadowdog85
schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dear Goddess! I love this story, please update soon, I want to know more of it.