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for The Last Temptation

by CuxW

schedule May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*cries* I thought there was a new chapter, when I saw the story in the Latest section, but sadly there wasn't *cries some more*
Are you going to finish this sometime? It would be really sad to see such a wonderful story remain unfinished.
person Anon
schedule April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story, I'm hoping you'll continue writing the remaining days.
person NaturalLogarithm
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Have I mentioned lately how glad I am that you're back up and writing? My next fic won't be something you'll like, but maybe after that, I'll finally finish your Little China Girl challenge.
schedule March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You updated and I only just noticed, but anyway it was once again a magnificent chapter.
I love the idea with the wings at the cafe and both Hannibal and Will looking at them. The dream sequence was also very hot and nicely written.
But what I liked most of all, mostly because it made me grin was Clarice's "His and Hannibal’s story wasn’t filled with the wickedness, the closeness or the heat and the secrecy hers had been." If only she knew the truth.
I'm definitely looking forward to another update and I can't wait for Hannibal to finally meet Will.

person tenshi
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"There was no escaping, so he might as well drink The Good Doctor down and enjoy him..."
this line had me laughing. Probably due to my dirty mind.
Thanx for the update. I love Will/Lecter fics.
person Lina
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh My FReaking God, this is the best Han/Will fic I HAVE EVER READ!!!!! I love the turmoil and the passion!!!
person Arche De Katze
schedule February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh please keep writing. this is too good of a story to just stop.
person Hannah Miller
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AMAZING
you hear that?
AMAZING!

i love it, please don't have dropped it

much suspense,
H
person PxW
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the story, so far so good. Thank for writing this story. :)
schedule August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another delightful chapter!
Things are finally heating up a bit and I love that you make Will somewhat demanding. He almost orders Hannibal to visit him and that is definitely something new.
The only thing that would have been nice to have would be if you had described Will's dreams a little more. But otherwise it is a great inspiring new chapter.
Keep up the good work,
darkangel985