rate_review Reviews

Well done! I'm a huge Sparrabeth fan and that kiss drove me so crazy. The sexual tension between those two...it was as though the writers had peeped into the brains over ever Sparrabeth fan in existence.

Enough about the movie.

This flash was really well done. Good work. Jack's introspective moments are written very nicely indeed, though some of your descriptions seem a bit clumsy. Lovely, none-the-less. I'd like to see a sister story to this one, one that shares Elizabeth's thoughts.

Aww come on, it's not like Jack didn't know what she was doing when she started to kiss him. But the lust between them throughout the movie can be measured in buckets. And I'll bet money that Jack even knows Will saw. They can't leave us like that! Greatest movie ever! PotC: At World's End, coming next year! Okay movie analysis over, rampant fanboy mode deactivated. Ahem

Very well done. It's well written, well timed. If I could still recommend stories, I'd recommend this one.

"Pirate"

Peace and blessings
-The Psycho Duck

I loved this fic, I've always known there was a hidden chemistry between them, and when they kissed I was soooooo happy! This describes it perfectly, I can't wait for the world's end, hehehehe.

Just got back from the movie. Thank you sooo much for writing this.

Good job! I just got back from my 2nd time seeing this. I liked how well you've captured Jack.

That's exactly how I hope it was! Damn was that a beautiful kiss. It came out of nowhere in the movie though.. even if I had been begging for it since the beginning of the first one, lol. I felt so sad for Jack, because it was like he had a taste of something he had never had before.. :( Hopefully we will have something to celebrate in the third film.