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for New Beginnings

by JennyPugh

person Killer Kadoogan
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am totally in love with this story!!! Freakin' awesome! I really love the way you write Jack. And your original characters rock!!! Just got a little Jack doll ( it's so cute!) from a McDonalds happy meal so I'm flyin' on cloud 9 right now! Only thing to make it better would be a new update- hint, hint. As always, happy writing, doll! Tengo que irme! Salud!
Hugs,
Killer K :D
person Boshomengro
schedule July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow strong stuff. Poor Celia, she's going to find things very hard now isn't she. Jack's going to have to do some pretty crawling to get her back; although she does need to step back and realise she made a big mistake in not giving Jack the chance to make his own decision regarding Millie. She needs shaking up a little to realise she's not quite as perfect as she thinks she is. You write such brilliantly accurate characters that Celia really seems real, faults an all. I'm looking forward to more as always.
person Stixie
schedule July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AHHH so good. Just read Saints and Sinners and now this... beside myself with anticipation. Jack is seriously starting to piss me off though... I almost smacked my laptop imagining it was Jack... no joke
schedule July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
1st chapter= SWEEETEEEETTTTT! haha! So did she have to sleep with the captain...OH! Poor Celia! Keep -em coming!!!
Love always

Susie
schedule July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Jack is really pissed at her! I hope they get back together..Post more! I can't wait!!!!

Susie
person Charli
schedule July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY another chapter! I love how he reacted to her and good for Celia for trying to sort herself out. I don't even feel that it would be a horrendous thing to do if she worked in that tavern because the emphasis is so different from other stories. I actually think it might be quite good for her, even though thats a horrible thing to say. update soon and i loved the jack relationship in this one! And yes Jack was Tortuga royalty!! woooo!!! King Jack... sounds good to me :D Next soon please! I love it already!
person kate
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hehe, that's cute.
poor celia, i hope she'll make it. and jack! aww... he deserves to see his daughter...that is, if he cares. lol
btw, whats the "week later: sorry, jack, smiled connie" about?
person kate
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nevermind, the page was just messed up.
person nightwish**
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great! i'm looking forward to many father-daughter scenes :D jack is just so adorable in the role of a dad!
update soon!
person Kaija
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You never fail to amaze me. I can't wait for the next installment! ♥