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I love this fic! I can't believe it's your first fan fic; it's so well-written. Also hot, sweet, sexy, and romantic. Really lovely. I was so excited to hear that there's a sequel! I'm off to read it now.

Delicious, though frustrating as hell.

You really do have an amazing way with words. The flow and tone are both engrossing, as well as your choice of phrasing. Good job all around and I'm on my way to the sequel so I won't be so frustrated :P

Loved it. Lovely voices (especially Jack), hot sex, excellent plotting. All the more impressive for being a first fic. I hope you intend to continue writing =)

I loved this one! <33 You seriously captured Jack Sparrow. More chapters?*pleads*

Wow! I love this piece! I think you've really pulled off Jack's way of talking which is SO often done badly. I really hope you're going to continue with it because, talk about a cliffhanger! I want Jack and Elizabeth to give in to one another in the end! I feel I ought to give some criticism (to be of use). I think it would maybe be improved if you added more detail to the characters thoughts and possibly their situations. At the moment the story moves along very quickly- almost sporadically and I think that maybe this is the reason why. Having said that, I'm really enjoying it- keep up the good work!

Lyria

PS I went to see Pirates of the Carribbean: Dead Man's Chest yeasterday and thought it was brilliant (I loved the scene between Jack and Elizabeth) and I'm so glad to see that someone has already posted a story taking the new film into account.

I think that THIS is the story that everyone has been waiting for .... I'm on to read the continuation now. Simply stellar. A++

wow! Perfect characterization of Jack! What a great story, expertly written, this is by far one of the best if not THE best fic i've ever read for this ship --which is my fav ship and there needs to be more!-- hope you continue to write more Jack/Elizabeth!

Aw.. that's so sad. I feel for Jack, because it's obvious that he really does care about her. Elizabeth should've given in, she has more to consider than only Will's feelings. Excellent job on this story, though, I can't believe you're already on chap 5 and Dead Man's Chest only came out this weekend! :) I hope to see much more from you along this vein.. this was exactly, EXACTLY, what I wanted to read after seeing the film.

Loved this and thank you for writing it. Just what I was looking for after the recent movie.

I thought that was great. Thouroughly enjoyed it.
I'd definity like to see more from you. (Even more so if it is this pairing)
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