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Wow, that was hot. Any chance for a sequel? Really, really good. I had to read the entire thing at once. Couldn't stop. : )

You wrote Jack so good.

That was hot.
:) I liked the ending, jajjjaajaja

Oh oh! Write more! I'm jonesing for more J/E after the movie. Can't wait to see what Jack's idea of 'revenge' on Elizabeth will be.

Oh dear me, I missed that first chapter somehow. Jacks's POV was lovely. **fans self** The description of the kiss really pulled me in and was exactly what I've been looking for. Descriptions are sexy as heck!

I love how you write Jack - the dialogue is terrif and the tension is just as good.

Chapter 5 review: Well, I'd like to say that pirate fanfiction writers can be a bit evil as well! It was very noble of Jack, but damn was it frustrating for me, heh. Lovely story! Will you continue or is this meant at the end?

oh wow. that was so amazing i had a hard time breathing. i hope you don't stop there.

Yup, no review responses here. But this'll have to do - sorry to clutter up your reviews. Yes, people are desperate for some good J/E and I'm one of them. *grins* I loved your story and the ending was *just* fine. In fact, it was F******* sexy as all get out. I'll definitely be reading it again.

I do hope that you do write something else in the PotC fandom, if the inspriation takes you. I'm in the middle of another one-shot, almost 2000 words in to it. I may cut out some of what I'd planned because I'm dying to post it. (lame, I know) But it's just a PWP based off of the scene where J/E were marooned on that isle in the original PotC.

Raving fangirls (like me, haha) were all rushing to the computer after seeing PotC2 this weekend. I imagine we'll both get plenty of 'hits' on the stories next weekend as well.