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for Devil's Bargain

by EvilE

person phantomrose21
schedule July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED YOUR STORIES. I HOPE YOU WRITE MORE JACK AND ELIZABETH STORIES MORE OFTEN. I LOOK FORWARD TO READING MORE OF YOUR WORK. I LOVE THIS PAIRING. YOUR LEMONS WERE TOP NOTCH. WELL, GOT TO GO. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK

*PHANTOMROSE21 :P
person Christina
schedule July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me there will be more! Please?
person yasashii_yoake
schedule July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WONDERFUL...ABSOLUTELY FABULOUS!! IT HAD ME ON THE EDGE OF MY SEAT THE WHOLE TIME WANTING MORE!
person Shimmeree
schedule July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story. Just lovely. We need more J/E stories as...detailed as this one. :D ;)
person Gabrielle (RandomJackass)
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Edgy and excellently written. Not fluffy at all. The best one I've read on this websit.e :)
person heather
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Utterly brilliant. I was blown away.
person solangee
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love you.
You're simply amazing.
Wow.
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
“You'll not betray Will, again. The way I see it, you've betrayed him twice, an' me twice, which seems to make it his turn again.”

This is an absolutely fantastic line and SUCH a good example of Captain Jack's personality and style of speech.
person Alzadea
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very well-writen story! Loved it!
person Anon.
schedule July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hands down, the best characterization of Capt. Jack Sparrow I've ever read. Just enough details to spark the imagination, but not too much to make the fic crude and vulgar. Also, props on writings skills (as in using correct grammar) and on word choice (great vocabulary).