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July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This fic makes me pretty darned happy. Nice job; fun ride. Hope you'll add more or write another piece in the series.
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July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this fic is truly wonderful. i love it! more please! *puppy dog eyes*
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July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THis was gorgeous! I love everything about it! <33333333
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July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aahhhhh, moore!!!!
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July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Alright, I take back everything bad I said in my review of 'Sweet Revenge'. This was fantastic- I really enjoyed it. The love aspect was a real shock but it fitted so well- perfect. Please continue writing!!
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July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey there!
Incredibly well written story.....and perfect timing to write it as I'm sure you know. I haven't read a Jack/Elizabeth fic this hot in a while tho....great job!
Elizabeth truly is a devious girl. Pirate true enough
Write more stories if they strike your fancy.....I will definately read them!
Incredibly well written story.....and perfect timing to write it as I'm sure you know. I haven't read a Jack/Elizabeth fic this hot in a while tho....great job!
Elizabeth truly is a devious girl. Pirate true enough
Write more stories if they strike your fancy.....I will definately read them!
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July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was so damn hawt! I loved it, really I loved it! Jack and Lizzie for ever!
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July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sheeesh, woman, this was perfectly wonderful! I loved the build up, and the touches of humor, the banter, the angst, just well..everything. Oh can't forget the sex, that was so darn good it almost hurt. :)
You write Jack's dialogue so well. I can almost hear his movie-voice voiceover while reading those lines. You did a great job with the general pirate chat as well, it read like it sounds and didn't seem choppy. Your writing is terrific - how do you do it so fast? And without a beta. I just have to squee aobut that too.
My favorite parts were the cabin scenes, of course, but not only because of the sex, but the banter between Jack and Elizabeth, plus inner dialogue and some very well done body language really 'made' those scenes for me. Of course, when Jack was acting vulnerable and telling Elizabeth he wanted her more than anything, just for one night even, I almost swooned. And when he asked her to tell him she loved him, that added a depth to the actual sex scene that made me swoon a second time. You brought the romance! Thank you for writing a sequel. Will there be inspiration for a third tryst between the two? *hopes*
You write Jack's dialogue so well. I can almost hear his movie-voice voiceover while reading those lines. You did a great job with the general pirate chat as well, it read like it sounds and didn't seem choppy. Your writing is terrific - how do you do it so fast? And without a beta. I just have to squee aobut that too.
My favorite parts were the cabin scenes, of course, but not only because of the sex, but the banter between Jack and Elizabeth, plus inner dialogue and some very well done body language really 'made' those scenes for me. Of course, when Jack was acting vulnerable and telling Elizabeth he wanted her more than anything, just for one night even, I almost swooned. And when he asked her to tell him she loved him, that added a depth to the actual sex scene that made me swoon a second time. You brought the romance! Thank you for writing a sequel. Will there be inspiration for a third tryst between the two? *hopes*
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July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Satisfying!! A great writer, especially dislogue. I did note that Will never answered Elizabeth's question about the 'whore's trick.' What's he hiding???