rate_review Reviews

The talent that you possess shocks me. I can name at least ten established professional writers that your talent surpasses. I have almost read all of your fics, I have maybe 2 more to go. I am so happy to have found you, and adultfanfiction. I was really starting to despair about the fact that many of the fics on fanfiction are not so good.....i have to have read over 500 Jack and Lizzie fics and now I find many new favorites because you so awesomely wrote and posted here!! I love ya, Lady Pirate!!!!

Now I am not going to want to look for more J/E fics after reading all of yours because I know it's just going to be 3 weeks of sorting through crap, just like every other time I come across excellent, touching work! So, therefore, you are obligated to keep writing these amazing J/E fics, or I shall die a horrible death filled with Mary Sues, self-inserts falling into movies, and mushy, wishy-washy Captain Jacks. You don't want that to happen to me, do you??? WRITE!WRITE!You Must!!

I am at a loss for words... Truly. I just read this entire fic in one sitting, I couldn't resist, shall we say your writing was far too persuasive. I noticed its existence due to your posting of the sequel, which is of course my next piece to read.

This story is incredible, amazingly well written. Your storytelling is incomparable. It's sexy as hell, filled with emotion, exciting...etc... I could go on forever. And best of all, you portray all the characters... but especially Jack and Elizabeth to a perfection. I am so glad that you have written/are writing a sequel..I really crave more! I have decided that viewing AWE, and thinking of this amazing story would be a great idea. Thank you for your beautiful contribution to sparrabeth fiction.

Hey! I absolutely LOVED this fic! I started reading it today and finished it in 3 hours! I couldn't stop reading! I am mad that Elizabeth chose Will over Jack! Maybe in your sequel she'll come to her senses and stay with Jack! I can't wait to read the sequel next! Great job and take care!

i have just finished reading your story.brilliant. you are very talented. thank you for sharing this story.all the best for your writing future.

incredibly wonderful! i loved how vicious you wrote elizabeth, and jack was perfect, of course. beautifully done, bravo!

Another excellant piece. I must say, as I scan through the section for pieces to read, without even realizing it almost every single work I have openned has been one of yours. And I feel I must add that the others that I have openned pale in comparison to your work. Keep writing such delightful pieces. I'm off to see what else I can find (and with the way the di have been falling, probably more of your work will be included in that.)

this was... kinda ooc. i like jack/elizabeth but i don't think that jack is so mad with elizabeth about what she did. and she isn't as coldhearted as you made her, either. the cup-of-tea warmth comparison was funny though.

::claps:: Truly excellent!! The action was vivid and the sex was hot. You did a great job of setting up complicated scenes in a clear way. And the way Jack talked, particularly around Queztalcoatl, was spot-on.

A few constructive criticisms: I'll admit I wasn't sure I was going to like this at first--Jack was a lot more bitter in this than he seemed in the movie, and Elizabeth was a lot more cruel. And I thought it was unneccessary to have the entire scene between Will, Elizabeth, and Barbossa written twice--I kept waiting for Jack to cut in and when I realized nothing was going to happen differently I just skimmed through to the point where Jack intervenes. I wish there had been more foreshadowing of the presence of Queztalcoatl... that really seemed to come out of left field. But once the action kicks in I got into it again. I think the writing got from good to excellent as the story progressed. This is the most satisfying Pirates of the Caribbean fic I've read. The sequel sounds awesome; I cannot wait!

I read the entire thing. That was amazing. *Bows down* I almost forgot I wasn't on a ship. That was intense.