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Ohh and you need to write that other thing...or I will hunt you down and make you. Don't think I wouldn't. I am very dangerous.

Fantastic story. I've got my fingers crossed for the sequel. :)

I just read the entire story, and wanted you to know it was wonderful. Thank you, and keep writing!!

Awesome! I would LOVE ro read a continuation. You write beatifully, and your style and outlook on on the Pirates movie is unique to all the others I've read. Keep up the good work!

Absolutely loved it. It moved along very well. I actually prefer longer stories, but only if they're tightly written and the plot moves along coherently, which this did in spades. LOVED it.

One confusion though, when Jack is confronting Elizabeth in the brig, and she pulls his gun from him and pulls the trigger (when he says it's not loaded), is the gun aimed at Jack? I couldn't tell from the story, the directionality of the gun, and I just didn't see Elizabeth actually shooting Jack in cold blood like that. If your intent was she was just testing the gun, away from Jack, to see if it was loaded, my apologies.

Thanks so much for writing, looking foward to your next piece.

Jadexms

One thing I forgot to mention. I REALLY enjoyed the fact that even though Jack admired what she did as a pirate, chaining him to the mast for the Kraken, he still calls her on it. He makes her realize that yes, she murdered him, his potential death was on her head. He didn't forgive her too quickly, she had to earn his forgiveness. Being as stubborn as she is, she almost died before admitting it. Wonderful.

Jadexms

you are so wonderful with details and plot that it made this little detail stand out. "red Navy uniform," The navy wears blue, not red. The marnies who are army men on ships wear red. Otherwise, this is a well written story. ( I like the detail of the grog)

I absolutely loved this story.

Once again, your way with words is positively amazing. But can't you give me a happy ending, just once? *grin*

Great, bloody fantastic. I loved it. It seemed so ... realistic, as if it could actually happen in the third. Well, if only it weren't a Disney movie.

Sequel? Yes, please. :D There is so not enough good sexy hawt J/E fic to be easily found, in my opinion.