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for The Island

by Lovergal

schedule May 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What a style you have! Absolutely beutiful! It's been a long time since I had to look up a word in a dictionary, my friend (specifically 'ataxic', nice research). This is among the highest quality fanfiction I have read on this site. Kudos :) I truly admire your ability to maintain the characters here, especially Jack's. He's a hard coconut to crack, might I say. I could really just let go and watch everything play out in my head. Like a scene from the movie (on my super-happy-magic-director's cut DVD heheh).
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done! Although I can't say that I would have been able to give up Jack....especially after sharing that with him! But a great story nonetheless.

JackSparrowsWench
person KAIJA
schedule March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GUHH! That was so hot. I hate William Turner. Liz and Jack should be together. :(
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love the story, I can absolutely imagine that having happened! Steamy! Sequel? Pleeaaase. ;D
person jj
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
dark, vulnerable eyes. beautiful ending, lovely fic!
person TC
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed, it, immensley.(sp?)
person rosemary
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was...
wow.
i loved it. especially the ending.
person Christina
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes... but no.. I loved the story, you did a great job.. I am just being selfish because I want Elizabeth to go back to Jack... damn ... lol ... but you did an awesome job and I LOVED how you put how Jack felt towards Elizabeth... when he told her he was falling in love with her.. that was bloody fantastic
person Mandy
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More! More, more, more!!!

Seriously, though, great story so far. I love Jack's dialogue, I can hear his voice clearly. Awesome writing - please continue!
person Captain Uschi
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was good!!!! I enjoyed it a lot!!! ^.^