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July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, and yes, I do like the ending, though I hope she will eventually come to the conclusion that Jack is her one twue wuv! (yes, I know I'm goofy)
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July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
VERRRRRYY Nice! I really liked this. Hope to read more of your POTC stuff!
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July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YES! I loved how that last chapter turned out. Love Jack's reactions and expressions. Poor Jack... Really beautifully wonderful. A+!
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July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good, I liked it a lot, even the super-angsty ending. I'd personally love to see a continuation where Jack tries to win her heart anyway.
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July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! PERFECT! I really love when you get to see Jack's vulnerable side and especially this part >>> “it’s not fair for you to do this to me, to make me fall in love with you when I can never have you. And now that you’re under me, naked, now that I’m inside of you, you ask me to stop. Don’t do that to me, love.”
WONDERFUL! Tell me you have more J/E fics in that wonmderfully talented brain of yours. I am totally at your mercy! Thank you so much for posting the end so quickly!
WONDERFUL! Tell me you have more J/E fics in that wonmderfully talented brain of yours. I am totally at your mercy! Thank you so much for posting the end so quickly!
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July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really good! One thing that you may want to edit for though. It's Miss Swann, not Mrs. Mrs. means she's married to someone named Swann.
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July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loving this! Bring on teh smut!
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July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok the part about them kissing already had me pacing the floor trying to cool off! Very nicely written! But now I must beg, plead, moan, cry whatever it takes to get some hot Jack lovin especially after I saw the new POTC movie ywice this weekend..PLEASE!!! Thanks in advance!
Onyx NYC
Onyx NYC
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July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
okay, I'm asking. Pleeaase!, Pretty Plleasase!!!
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July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awesome fic i love it you really got liz's haughty taughty attitude n jacks swaggering cheeky charms i love it n want some sex plz.