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August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story so far! Please do update soon1
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August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
keep it goin!!
u got me suspended here!!!
lovin' it! keep it up!!!
shellie
xxx
u got me suspended here!!!
lovin' it! keep it up!!!
shellie
xxx
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August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay that was great, funny, sexy, you gave it all! Some of Jack's lines had me giggling madly. Come on Jack, go to her. His jealousy was even sexy!
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August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I always love the way you portray Jack...and inner monologue is soo much fun!
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August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm pretty sure I am just LOVING this story. Wonderfully written.
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August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This chapter is so incredibly awesome! You completely captured Jack and his arguments with himself were hysterical! I can't wait to read more!
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August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was a really great chapter. I loved the bantering between Jack and, well, Jack.
I loved his little fantasy about crashing through the church window! I laughed out loud when I read that.
I can't wait for your next update.
I loved his little fantasy about crashing through the church window! I laughed out loud when I read that.
I can't wait for your next update.
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August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh that new ending was evil! Did it point to Jack? Why'd he leave? The rum bit was too funny.
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August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh the angst! I love it! So I'm assuming the compass did swing his way, oh good. Can't wait to hear Jack's reaction. *bounces up and down in anticipation*
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August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy Mother of God. If you don't get moving on this and keep it going, I may just shoot meself. You are friggin' amazing, and I doff my hat to you. Sigh.
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