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for Women

by pirategirl

person Anon
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
incredible chapter, what will she do when she realizes he's just looking for the copass!? Or will he forget the compass? Hee.
person sina
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aaaaaah...how can u stop here!!!!go on asap!!!
person Anon
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooohhh...Write more! Must find out what will happen next!
person Anon
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gawd... this fic had my sides hurting xD
person jadexms
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is terrific. Well written, well plotted, makes my heart ache one minute for Lizzie, Jack AND Will, then I want to laugh the next at something said or written. Absolutely cannot wait for more, this is so good. Thank your for your time and effort to create it.
person Anon
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OoOoOhhh...what's gonna happen next?!?!?!?!
person T.Maria
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lovin' this story, its so origiinal!
keep it up and update asap!!!!!!

I'm also likin' how you've written Will's POV. I don't really care about him in the films too much (coz hes the one standing in the way of J/E being together hehe)but it intregues me to know how he feels about the whole J/E relationship.

anyway, keep it up its great!!!!!!!
person Shimmeree
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WONDERFULLY done! I love how it's drawn out. I can't wait for more!
person shatteredmind
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was truly inspired! I loved Norrington's trouble making. He was slick, wasn't he? And the touches of humor were nice as well 'jumping into the Kraken with a hard-on'. My word. Jack's inner thoughts really had me laughing. Go J/E!
person jessica
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story! It's on my favorites list now, I can't wait for things to *really* heat up.

PLease update soon, luv!