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Ohh, this is good. When are we gonna see some Jack/Elizabeth action? Pretty please soon? *<;-)

Great story, and I'll be watching for updates.

WONDERFUL...I always do love a good Jack/Elizabeth fic. Hope you update soon!

Those two chapters were nice, very nice indeed. You're doing great with the dialogue and characters, keeping it light while wrestling with the serious issues... I love your Norrington! God bless me, I just love Norry, period. He has some of the BEST lines in PotC1, and was hilarious in PotC2 (and better looking!) Your Norry is proper-British and oh so yummy. Not easy to write a sequel to DMC, is it? Got a lot of plotlines to pick up, have you? You're doing a great job, keep it up. The humor is great too. Your mission: Keep writing and in doing so increase the respectability of aff.net!

And... WHERE'S JACK????

:D More please!! this is really good!

I love it so far. Very well written with a great plot so far...looking forward to more, thanks for writing.

i'm intruiged. looking forward to more.

Uh oh, will Norrington be a big baddie here? Nice chapter, I liked Elizabeth's fantasy in the beginning - half-wishing Jack would storm the wedding. Poor thing is reluctantly smitten. :)

Cool, but may I suggest you have a beta, there are a number of places where the wrong word or wrong spelling has been used. And the monster is the Kraken, not kragon

GREAT job with ELizabeth's POV. Naturally they would want her to be properly married, but that does put a kink in the whole J/E thing, doesn't it? You've captured the ironic angst of this pairing really well.

p.s. how does he get out of the Kraken?