rate_review Reviews

Hello again! I'm really looking forward the moment, when James comes to rescue me..
*ahem* I mean her... :)

This story is so good. I never used to like Norrington in that way but your story has made me hot for him. ;) PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEEEEEEASE continue soon. I'm on the edge of my seat here.

Elise isn't a Mary Sue don't worry OMR finally Cap'n Jack Sparrow's in ze story WOOOO update soon

A mary-sue is a "perfect" character. She usually gets hooked up with main characters such as Jack Sparrow - or in this case, James Norrington. She is flawless and beautiful and everyone is jealous of her but she isn't snotty about it. Etc, etc, etc. But your Miss Gold is a developed character, and actually has background and thought put into her, so she's an exception. Pairings with main characters can be tastefully done, as your story proves.

AND FINALLY, JACK SPARROW! -snuggles Jack...and James ^^-

oh, luverly chappie, as always! i haven't been reviewing, but i've been following your story quite obsessively...ahem, i meant 'closely.' a Mary-Sue, is a pathetic little person with no personality and is a terrible main character. or she's a protagonist who's gorgeous, perfect at everything, and all the men are in love with her. At least, that'a the most common definition. Most of the "experts" i know cry "MARY-SUE!" whenever the main female role falls in love with any of the main characters, which makes it a bit difficult to write a romance, don't u think? Anywho, i don't think you have much to worry about, although there probably are people out there who would scream "MARY-SUE!!" at the top of their lungs, simply because she and our dear commodore fell in love. well, i hope i helped without rambling on too much:) write more please! i'm anxiously awaiting the next chappie!

Well.
since you asked for a review...
I have just found your story and I LOVED it. There are only few stories about Norrington, and even fewer with a bit of romance in store, so please go on letting poor Norry be the hero and rescue Elise.
By the way, I very much admire your style of writing, especially in the way you portrayed Norrington. I myself am no native speaker, but I know a well written story when I see one.
So, onward brave writer! We long for more!

Greetings,
Draculea

Goody, goody.
I'm sizzling with anxiety! Please continue... may I just ask for one thing;
please don't make Jack look TOO bad. :)

yay! finally!
lol, how does jack always find himself in these situatioins :D the poor man probably just wanted some rum. aww..

anyway! i really really really love your story! and i think you should update more often!!
keep going

great chappy OMR I knew it had to be Sparrow!!! Ahh can't wait for the next chappy n_n

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHhhh cliffhanger!! while i do not consider myself a norrington fan, i am really enjoying this story. i didnt like him in dead mans chest, he was such an ass. anyway please keep up the good work